[KiyoharuxTora] "The Good Samaritan", 01/0?

[blindcottonlove]

"THE GOOD SAMARITAN", 01/0?

BANDS/ARTISTS: Kiyoharu, Alice Nine, SCREW, Kagrra,, Danger Gang
CHARACTERS: Kiyoharu, Tora, Shou, Byou, Nao (ex-Kagrra,), Rei (ex-Danger Gang)
PAIRINGS: KiyoharuxTora (not the focus, though; see genres)
RATING: PG13-PG15 for the entire series, might get higher in the later chapters
GENRE: AU, adventure, action, crime

Comments

[xme_chanx]

ohh, good stuff! Can't wait to see more! :D

[blindcottonlove]

:Dv Thank you! It's nice to hear it works, considering I've never written stuff like this before<3

[ladyrevania]

No fluff and violence, lots of action - definitely my thing. I'm really curious what will happen later :). Also, even if I'm not a Kiyoharu fan I think the main pairing is quite interesting (and no Gazette in the bands, I really hate this Gazette fic spam xD), they're both manly. Your way of writing is quite descriptive and the dialogues make sense, they don't talk like they were retarded ;)

I hope next chapter will be as interesting as this one, I'll read it for sure :)

[blindcottonlove]

they don't talk like they were retarded ;)

I've been writing and sharing fiction since... 2008?, and this is by far the most awesome comment I've gotten during all these years 8D It's quite a compliment, thank you! ;D

(Actually, since it's my first time attempting writing crime, I was worried the characters might end up being fake, heh, so thanks, it's actually quite soothing to hear the dialogue works♥)

Oh, Gaze!Fic!Flood *headdesk* I don't mind seeing a lot of fics about them -I just skip them- but they tend to be identical, recycling the same plots and character traits, so I've given up on reading them :/ (well, except a few exceptions, ofc)

I'm sure you'll enjoy the following chapters because in my opinion, the story just gets better and better after I've done all the necessary introductions :D Thanks for taking the time to read&comment!

[ladyrevania]

That's probably because I write too and I know what kind of comments I'd like to receive.

Gazette fanfics used to be better in the past, but it was... a few years ago I think. I skip these too, but there is hardly anything I'd like to read, though some people are getting tired of Gazette too and slowly start writing something else, which makes me a happy person, because I really like variety :).

As long as the actions of all characters make sense, it's not fluffy and doesn't contain more smut than plot - I will probably like it. First chapter is good so far :)

[snotkrush]

This is my type of fic, I'm definitely looking forward for the next chapters. Plus, Tora is just perfect as a dark, misterious, grumpy stranger who likes to handle guns...

Just one little thing: at a certain ponint Shou says: "After showering I did as Tora had suggested..." but, if I didn't read wrong, he doesn't know Tora's name. Other than that, I like this a lot, can't wait for more!

[snotkrush]

*looking forward TO the next chapters!

See, we all make mistakes!

[blindcottonlove]

...*headdesk* Thanks for pointing that out! I just knew when I was writing that I would slip his name in there :D Got it fixed now~

And thank you for taking the time to read :) I'm thrilled that people seem to be so excited about this, although I'm a noob when it comes to writing action.

Heh, when I was thinking about characters, that ancient-old photoshoot of Pon and Tora with guns popped up in mah head, and I just knew I had to pick Tora as one of the main leads :D I still think that photoshoot is one of the sexiest the band has produced *drools a bit*

[bauci]

Well this certainly looks interesting. Looking forward for more!

[blindcottonlove]

Thank you! :D It's fun to hear you're enjoying this. I'm posting more soon<3

[blindcottonlove]

Thanks :) I've practically written like three next chapters, now I'm just proofreading and adding stuff here and there, so more will follow soon~