[FIC] Hello Mr. Piano Man {JaeSu, PG?}

Jan 16, 2009 00:55

{Hello Mr. Piano Man}
JaeSu, PG?
Slight angst? I really don't know... >.>

No more shades of grey left in the world to distort and hide underneath. )

drabble, jaesu, written, gods...rising from where?

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baboboy January 16 2009, 06:16:00 UTC
angssstttt ohh god no! brb

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baboboy January 16 2009, 06:37:43 UTC
D: I loved it! oh god
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“Then what are you waiting for?”
;______________;

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sunev789 January 16 2009, 09:49:08 UTC
I know. ♥
Thanks for reading, bbs~ 8DDD
<333

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starof_earendil January 16 2009, 06:19:11 UTC
Spot!

And Kiss askdfjal Japanese words give me goose bumps. The way Jae belts out Sayonara in the end.

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sunev789 January 16 2009, 09:49:31 UTC
I KNOW~ *shivers*

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starof_earendil January 16 2009, 20:12:37 UTC
<33333333333
This was really beautiful, I can hear the keys of the piano being played in my head as I read this. The grey scale imagery was lovely, I could see a darkish room with the black piano, only Jae and Su being in color.

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sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:52:22 UTC
Thank you, thank you. BOWS.
I was trying to make it dark, but pretty. ♥~
<3333

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sunev789 January 16 2009, 09:49:44 UTC

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kuro_wolf January 16 2009, 09:33:11 UTC
Ooohhhh! Wow~...
Hehehehe that made me so emotional but i feel so happy too!
XD
Loving JaeSu, so sweet. Sigh.. hehehe.

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kuro_wolf January 16 2009, 09:34:53 UTC
Is it weird that i did nt see that as angsty?
Hmmm, to me it seemed that Jae sorta needed an anchor to reality. Is it? hmmm now im over analysing. Hehehe
Overall, i love it, im mem-ing it, bravo~!

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sunev789 January 16 2009, 09:51:48 UTC
I don't either...
I just didn't know what catagory to put it in! POUTS.
OMG! YOU'RE MEMMING THIS!? DDD:
*loves you forever*
That just made my all smiley. 8DDD ♥~
<3333

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weerainbow January 16 2009, 12:27:38 UTC
You wrote about black and white and shades of grey but I see colours everywhere in your words...I don't know how else to describe it. It was really beautiful. And oh yeah the last line went straight to my heart and caused it to skip a beat.

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sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:38:38 UTC
AW~ ♥
You're comment makes me feel so much better about this fail fic. XDDDD
Thank you loads~ ♥
<333

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