<33333333333 This was really beautiful, I can hear the keys of the piano being played in my head as I read this. The grey scale imagery was lovely, I could see a darkish room with the black piano, only Jae and Su being in color.
Is it weird that i did nt see that as angsty? Hmmm, to me it seemed that Jae sorta needed an anchor to reality. Is it? hmmm now im over analysing. Hehehe Overall, i love it, im mem-ing it, bravo~!
I don't either... I just didn't know what catagory to put it in! POUTS. OMG! YOU'RE MEMMING THIS!? DDD: *loves you forever* That just made my all smiley. 8DDD ♥~ <3333
You wrote about black and white and shades of grey but I see colours everywhere in your words...I don't know how else to describe it. It was really beautiful. And oh yeah the last line went straight to my heart and caused it to skip a beat.
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Thanks for reading, bbs~ 8DDD
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And Kiss askdfjal Japanese words give me goose bumps. The way Jae belts out Sayonara in the end.
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This was really beautiful, I can hear the keys of the piano being played in my head as I read this. The grey scale imagery was lovely, I could see a darkish room with the black piano, only Jae and Su being in color.
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I was trying to make it dark, but pretty. ♥~
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Hehehehe that made me so emotional but i feel so happy too!
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Loving JaeSu, so sweet. Sigh.. hehehe.
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Hmmm, to me it seemed that Jae sorta needed an anchor to reality. Is it? hmmm now im over analysing. Hehehe
Overall, i love it, im mem-ing it, bravo~!
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I just didn't know what catagory to put it in! POUTS.
OMG! YOU'RE MEMMING THIS!? DDD:
*loves you forever*
That just made my all smiley. 8DDD ♥~
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You're comment makes me feel so much better about this fail fic. XDDDD
Thank you loads~ ♥
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