Comments | sunev789: [FIC] ONE NIGHT II (And A Little Less Clothes...) {MinHo, NC-17}

sunev789

[FIC] ONE NIGHT II (And A Little Less Clothes...) {MinHo, NC-17}

Jan 16, 2009 04:17

{One Night II} And A Little Less Clothes...
MinHo, NC-17
Romance? Fluff? USELESS SMUT! ♥
There's some striptease in here as well! 8DDDD

( Tongue released from behind his lips, he licks the length of his index finger, only to bring it back down, trailing saliva down his Adam’s apple and past the indent of collar bones. )

written, gods...rising from where?, oneshot, hominotp

Comments 37

muramatsu_aoi January 16 2009, 11:05:45 UTC

woot~~

that was really hot..loved the way you maintained the intensity throughout~from the striptease to the main event~ thanks

sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:34:53 UTC

Yay~ I was kinda hoping the stripping was alright. 8D
Thanks, bbs! ♥
<3333

greensilverinna January 16 2009, 11:13:24 UTC

"GOODNIGHT YOU FILTHY PERVERT."
awesome-est line ever!
haha.
i totally love ur fic!

HEARTS FOR YOU!!!
♥♥♥♥

sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:36:34 UTC

I love that line!
Just popped into my head. XDDDD
*takes hearts & puts in special bag* ♥
<333

purpaidhliska_x January 16 2009, 16:39:06 UTC

somewhere between the front door and their bedroom, they ended up fucking like two straight hormonal teenagers that just started using the pill
I think you should write that too.
It's only a suggestion.
I love this by the way.
:D

sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:40:51 UTC

LMAO!
I write too much HoMin smut...
More should be coming up soon. XDDDD
Thanks, hun.
<3333

yuxo January 16 2009, 17:36:29 UTC

WHEEEEEEE SWEET LOVELY MINHO :'DDDDDDDD

♥

sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:41:29 UTC

RULES MY LIFE. 8DDDDD
<3333

starof_earendil January 16 2009, 20:07:41 UTC

Ahh! This was so good! I felt through were two tones rolling through out the story, one was the strong love between them, but the second I can't really describe. It's like a mellow tune in the background, like everything is as it should be. This is great! <3

sunev789 January 17 2009, 00:50:23 UTC

SWEET~ 8DDD
That's what I was aiming for. *feels accomplished*
<3333

starof_earendil January 17 2009, 02:31:14 UTC

You have good aim then! /bad pun. :3