[FIC] one, two, three, four...how many more? {HoMin, PG-13}

Jan 27, 2009 13:33


{one, two, three, four...how many more?}
HoMin, PG-13
Angst & maybe fluff? Implied sex.
I honestly have no idea where this came from...it just kinda happened. T___T

You weren’t built for a life that didn‘t contain him. )

written, gods...rising from where?, oneshot, hominotp

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sunev789 January 27 2009, 21:58:36 UTC
I know, that's why I wrote Fluff?.
I was going to make it completely sad, but didn't have the heart. XDDD

THANK YOU~ ♥

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kohie January 27 2009, 20:26:27 UTC
HJBAKSFGVAKSD WHAT ARE YOU A FIC SPITTING MACHINE HJIKASDLÖFGASD WHAT THE FUCK HAJSDFÖKLGA.

...okay. going to read it now &hearts

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kohie January 27 2009, 20:48:43 UTC
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GOD YOU ARE SO AWFUL HFJKÖLASDKHGIOERGASDF

Just because you were the baby now didn’t mean you were going to give in without fighting back.
HWAITING BABY &hearts

Hugs and touching became commonplace, even if you didn’t like it too much, you knew it made him feel better, so insecure in his leader role that even if he was supposed to treat you all the same, the innocence quickly became dangerous.
asbhjfasf oh my. coherency has left me the day i met you.

Eventually, though, ( ... )

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sunev789 January 27 2009, 22:01:57 UTC
KEYBOARD SMASH GOODNESS! 8Db

;~; You treat me too well. WEEPSSOBSCRIES.

NO, I FELT IT THOUGH. OUR HEARTS ARE ONE. OH, SO DAMN CHEESY.

Don't leave me, Vera. NEVER. YOU MAKE ME SMILE. ♥

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kohie January 27 2009, 22:09:56 UTC
I MASTER THIS ART PRETTY WELL, RIGHT 8DD

HJKLÖASDF I LOVE CHEESE, DON'T STOP!

NEVER &hearts MAKING YOU SMILE IS A NICE FEELING.

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doma_arsonica January 27 2009, 20:26:30 UTC
That was so good. T____T good and painful. I think you were made to write heartbreaking fics. ><;;

How everything changed from "being like him" to "being with him". sdkfjason everything about this was just an emotional roller coaster to the last bit.

really nice ^____^

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sunev789 January 27 2009, 22:03:50 UTC
THANK YOU. T___T
I don't think my heart could survive any more sadness. XDD

Gah~ You treat my fics so well. THANK YOU, BBS. ♥

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yuxo January 27 2009, 20:30:26 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

...:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Except that you were male, another strike against you.

mmhmm, that's how it's done.

........

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dies i'll just...go now.

(:DDDD!!) ♥ slfkjsdj

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sunev789 January 27 2009, 22:06:03 UTC
All the smiles had me smiling like this--->8DDDD
Sobsinhappiness~
Thank you, bbs. ♥

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dora0chan January 27 2009, 21:01:30 UTC
Even though this story has been used and abused, but you did a very nice job. I really, really like it. Had my heart wear dark blue for a few moments. Keep it up =D

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sunev789 January 27 2009, 22:07:08 UTC
I know, cliche. >.>
But I'll try make something better next time 'round~ 8DDD
Thank you fro reading & commenting, hun! ♥

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dora0chan January 28 2009, 18:39:34 UTC
No, actually, what I was trying to say is that it's cliche but so far from it. If you can understand(I wonder if even I can T_T) =D

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sunev789 January 29 2009, 02:40:00 UTC
I got'cha~
Don't worry, I always have a low self-esteen over my fics anyways. T___T

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