[fic] VF: And the Winner Is....

[sunflower1343]

Title: And the Winner Is....
Pairing: Asami x Akihito
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Pretty cracky at points

Notes: This is in response to: ego_elite's challenge to let Akihito win for once. And it's for Takaba's birthday.

Comments

[kafuuma]

Very sweet, Shelly !! I wish Akihito could be that mature in the manga *sobs*
A dorky Asami : I pray Yamane sensei to write some crack chapters after NT arc, especially forcing himself with ice cream ^^"

[sunflower1343]

He will be that mature. Someday. In the future. Right before the series ends. *sob* XD

We really need crack VF. I'm hoping the fanbook gets a little silly. :)

[arrasails]

You know, it is such a sweet story, it was good to read it.
Thank you for writing it ^^ :hugs:

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. I made sure it was sweet for his birthday. I wrote a sad one for Fei's and felt bad LOL.

[mtarashidango]

Kyaaaa~!! That was so good! At first, cracky and fun with the challenges and the ice cream, but ending with such a deep moment between them :) As always, I love the way you portray these two ^_^

Yay~ for Aki winning for a change XDD and Yay for you for sharing this with us :) *hugs and chu*

[sunflower1343]

^__^ Thank you! This reminded me a bit of your DJ and I kept picturing the Dance Dance Revolution thing and laughing. I knew I couldn't top that lol. Glad you enjoyed it though. *hugs*

[afterburn]

"That little bastard. He'd best hope he never runs into me again."
"I don't think you frequent the same sorts of places. Really Asami, a five year old opponent?"
"He broke our deal. That's inexcusable at any age."

OH MAN. I was laughing so hard when Asami was fighting with a five year old. That was ridiculous and hilarious all at once. Especially Asami's reaction to the prick at the ice cream parlor. I wanna throw a cherry at one of those guys.

And so sweet~! Sitting in the bath tub, talking about all that. Asami really is rather dense at times, but you really made him so human here. Admitting to his defeat and his, well not really "fear" but his refusing to let Akihito go.

"You were actually thinking like this while all this was happening?"
Asami looked startled. "Of course. Doesn't everyone?"
"Well... no...."
I wish I thought like that. I would feel so superior.

I really enjoyed reading this. It was definitely a treat to have during my break of midterm studying. Dx

[sunflower1343]

Thank you! I have a fic I've never posted with Asami sitting next to a little kid on a plane trip to the States. It's quite a battle. I'll have to work the thing over and post it. ^_^

This was a fun one to write. I'm glad it gave you a break during studying. Exams suck. Good luck on them! :)

[afterburn]

HAHAHAH oh man you will have to post that. I can see it perfectly and it sounds hilarious.

[hyper_airis]

oh God. Asami + ice cream + pink. *dead*

But yeah, I liked how you portrayed these two. And how Akihito won against Asami for a change. And the last two paragraphs = ♥

Thanks for sharing~!

[sunflower1343]

XD I thought pink ice cream would be the most insulting to him. *runs*

It was fun having Akihito win. I'm glad you enjoyed it too! Thanks!