[ficlet] Missing Pieces

Nov 21, 2007 21:23

Title: Missing Pieces
Pairing: Asami x Aki
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: up through NT
Warnings: none

Note: Takes place about June the year after HK. Just a little contemplative from Akihito's POV.

It's Mar-chan's birthday! YAY!!!!!!!!! Happy Birthday Mar-chan! This is just for you. *hugs*

Missing Pieces )

takaba, asami

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twistedsheets10 November 22 2007, 05:01:45 UTC
Ahahahaha. Wonderful. :)

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:24:05 UTC
^___^ Thank you.

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scorch66 November 22 2007, 05:38:53 UTC
Beautiful ansd heart-warming as always. I hope you continue this! I really want to see Asami's reaction to Aki's necklace too!<3

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:23:42 UTC
Thanks very much! :) Asami reaction? That's easy: *Pounce!* XDD

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Great little thought... checklost November 22 2007, 05:43:23 UTC
I guess we should all wish best of luck to the favorite couple and to Mar-chan on her birthday.

It's so much fun to drop on others private, intimate moments. One reason I really like this story is because the bath is my favorite place to think, especially now that the winter has finally set in and its a little cold in my basement apartment.

Great writing style. It is clear and descriptive, well paced and amusing.

Thanks for taking the time to write this story,
Joanna

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Re: Great little thought... sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:22:48 UTC
LOL, I was just wishing I had a bath and not just a shower. That's probably where this came from.

Thank you for your very nice words. :)

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silver_lion23 November 22 2007, 06:58:48 UTC
Aww. I'm glad you have them coming to an understanding and yet still have a unique relationship. I can see something like this after reading LP3 (whether or not it's before or after NT). Thank you for sharing it, and happy birthday Mar-chan. =)

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:21:27 UTC
*nods* It's a pretty common theme for me, because what else are my fics for but to grant all my wishes? XD I hope it comes true. Thanks for your comments! :)

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thousandbirds November 22 2007, 08:10:32 UTC
That sure helps me to relief my tension. Thank you for such a wonderful story.

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:19:37 UTC
Thanks! Writing it helped me with some of mine today. I glad it made your day a little better. :)

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