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[fic] VF ficlet:: One Last Promise

Feb 18, 2008 17:33

Title: One Last Promise ( Read more... )

Comments 65

earths_fury February 18 2008, 23:33:57 UTC

Oh.Wow. This was heartbreakingly beautiful. I felt as if I was watching all of this happening, Now I feel inexplicably sad, yet happy that their love is forever. Even if Asami never said the words he always showed how much he cared. And the fact that he came for Akihito at the end...beautiful and devoted. Wow. Amazing as always.

heiligwasser February 19 2008, 00:08:10 UTC

it's a really beautiful piece of work, i never get tired of reading you writings *sigh*

fujimiya_rannee February 19 2008, 00:08:49 UTC

this is just so beautiful!u made me teary,but at least they get to b together :)

ramble_corner February 19 2008, 00:19:10 UTC

oh dear
*furtively hunts for tissue ....
I had a feeling it would turn out that way but just couldn't helped reading it to the end. the scene where he felt like Asami came was sooo heartbreaking and yet... so right

Thanks for sharing

twisted_oddity February 19 2008, 00:30:23 UTC

Oh my freaking God!!! *cries all over her keyboard* That was magnificently beautiful. Just lovely. What a nice ending.