[fic] VF: The Open Road

Jul 08, 2008 20:38

Title: The Open Road ( Read more... )

takaba, asami

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darkangeltrish July 9 2008, 02:33:45 UTC
That was fun. Aki really change Asami here and yes for the first time in reading fanfics, I've read that Asami is having fun on his date with Aki. *lol*

But wonder what did they do in that jeans shop until the owner ask Aki not to bring Asami in that store. :D

Thanks for the story. It's wonderful. *bows down respectfully**

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cirrus74 July 9 2008, 03:09:19 UTC
Ooh, that was awesome, sunflower-san! ^^ And it's sweet that Asami realized that he's happy with Aki.

@darkangeltrish: They had smex in the changing room XDXD

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darkangeltrish July 9 2008, 03:58:35 UTC
Bwahahahaha...No wonder Asami has that smirk. They were having smex in the changing room.*ROFLMAO* Glad that Asami is happy with Aki coz Aki really change him. (^_^)

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sunflower1343 July 10 2008, 01:52:03 UTC
Thanks very much! I think Asami wants to change Aki but you're right, Aki is changing Asami too. I think he's the only thing who could. :)

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cherokee1 July 9 2008, 02:40:58 UTC
Oh, god.
Asami riding bitch.
Be still my heart.
I loved this; so many memorable lines!
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sunflower1343 July 10 2008, 01:55:09 UTC
XDD He's riding bitch, which is coincidentally seme position. Heh. I actually intended that they be on separate bikes, but when I got there Asami got on the bike with him. I liked the idea of Asami depending on Aki and trusting him enough to ride behind him.

And the thought of it was kind of hot. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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yoruichi19 July 9 2008, 02:43:42 UTC
haha it was realyy funny.
asami rides a bike with akihito..... xd
kawaii idea....

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sunflower1343 July 10 2008, 01:56:17 UTC
I was going to put them on bikes, but then motorcycles entered my brain and it was just too good. XD

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aoi_aka July 9 2008, 02:46:52 UTC
Oi. I read this on my way to answer the poll in the community.

My heart aches to think that Asami never seems happy in the manga. Goodness. The man is all pure power and sex. This little glimpse was very good.

"Change."

"That's why I never get into relationships. The other person always wants me to change."

"Did you just make a joke? Excuse me while I record this moment."

*wipes tears* Oh that was too funny. Asami made a joke! The peanut gallery applauds.

Asami'd never seen him this way, so hungry for him.

You know, the way the last chapter came out it seems to me that Takaba is coming to terms with his relationship with Asami. I really believe that one he's back in Japan, Asami won't leave Takaba alone anymore. It'll be like this. It won't be lovey-dovey but there will be admissions of lurve and need.

Thank you for sharing! This was awesome and ayumi2's request is what caught my eye. I'm glad I read it. I wish it did come true. :D

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mammarella July 9 2008, 02:53:59 UTC
there was one time, I think, when Asami had fun.
Takaba Akihito's graceful summer holiday.
Asami looks like a kid in a candy store :)

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aoi_aka July 15 2008, 02:10:54 UTC
Would you, perchance, have a link or title so I can look for it? :)

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scorch66 July 9 2008, 02:55:05 UTC
There are way too many brilliant lines to quote, so I'm simply going to say this: an awesome story like always, with depth, fluff and humour, and definetly one of the sweetest I've read. Thank-you! :)

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sunflower1343 July 13 2008, 17:14:56 UTC
Thank you. That's pretty much what I like to write, humor and romance and hopefully in a different light. :)

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