[ficlet] VF: A Step in the Right Direction

Dec 24, 2008 00:36

Title: A Step in the Right Direction ( Read more... )

feilong, yoh

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a_ngua December 24 2008, 08:26:30 UTC
Oh, you got me there - “It's not a terribly cheerful story…” so I thought “No, no,no… Maybe I shouldn’t read this one…”
It’ just that I feel quite fragile in mind these days, and I can’t take too much.
Well, I’m glade that I was brave *chuckles* (more like - curiosity kills the cat)
You were kind to Yoh, but still in the terms of real life.
I was thinking… can one be total immune to so much love? Someone else put his life for you? Is it possible that in the end, one will answer? It should be only natural. Holding breathe and just dive in? Surrender? Feilong?! Not likely, but then again…
Hope…
Merry Christmas!

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 12:01:13 UTC
My stories generally aren't too bad, though if they are I'll put it in the warnings. *hugs* I'm sorry you're not feeling so great.

I think people can be immune to love, if they're people who don't crave it. But Feilong craves love so I think he will have a hard time ignoring this man who has offered his heart. Only, Yoh won't be his idea of Prince Charming, so Fei won't give in easily. But that makes it fun. ^___^

Merry Christmas!

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prikliuchenie December 24 2008, 09:08:34 UTC
*sparkles* Thank you! I really, really needed that! *huge pleased smile*

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 12:01:49 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad it lifted your spirits a little. :)

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purrple_267 December 24 2008, 09:51:57 UTC
Aww, that was the best Christmas gift! Your writing is beautiful..I want to say something more profound than that, but my brains aren't working at the moment. Are you considering writing more of this pairing? Please do, lol xP

Merry Christmas! :*

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purrple_267 December 24 2008, 10:27:46 UTC
Lol. Just further proves my brain impotency today.

Shelly, you know what I mean, right, right???!!! xP

Agreed! There should definitely be more of this pairing. Especially by good authors!^.^

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lethalene December 24 2008, 10:24:00 UTC
I'm not really a Yoh fan (except since the last chapters because he looks hot with all those wounds) but you gave him depth and actual flesh. Probably I couldn't relate to Yoh before because he's kinda like a two dimensional character to me. (and I didn't like his looks before he got beaten - I'm so mean :-P)

I also like that you keep his interaction with Fei at this level where we ask ourselves if there's a possibility for them both or not. I find this far more engaging to leave the questioning open. Plus Fei looks more IC this way.

Thanks for the fic. I very much enjoyed it.

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lethalene December 24 2008, 10:25:06 UTC
Oh, and before I forget: Merry Christmas to you!

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 11:43:54 UTC
Thanks. :) And Merry Christmas to you too!

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ladymusashi December 24 2008, 10:52:38 UTC
Awwwww! After Asami/Akihito, this is my favorite pairing. Yoh is such a darling, I hope Yamane-sensei will give him his Dragon. ^^ I think this was really sweet. I had really bad few days and this story truly brightened up my morning. Thank you!

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 11:40:02 UTC
*hugs* for your days, which must be rough this time of year. I hope a little cheer makes its way into your holiday. *more hugs*

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