[ficlet] VF Drabble: Intoxication

[sunflower1343]

Title: Drabble: Intoxication
Pairing: Asami x Akihito
Rating: R
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Yamane-sensei, and I thank her for letting me play with them.

Notes: This was brought on by those amazing Weiss Kreuz writers of old. They always stir up something inside me.

Comments

[marybala]

Eh . to each one his poison, i guess. i find Takaba especially ... desirable in this fic. I know i'm in trouble when i can picture the way the tungsten light might reflect on his ass when he falls. The begining made my breath catch. Sloppiest striptease in all the history of fanfics ! i love it ! oh. yes. You rock !

nb : if fei's the serpent, asami sure turns into a bull when embraced ? hey ! this is not WK, this is Fruit basket ! Mmwrreowr ! (yes, reading fruit basket now because you mentioned it. I actually love it - its unexpected- couldnt open the WK zip yet because i have licence issue with winzip that i will resolve this weekend because i m a self assured responsible girl and not bridget jones)

[sunflower1343]

WinRar is free and needs no license, and it unzips everything. after a month you have to click "No I don't want a license", but it's free forever.

But yes, Furuba is unexpected, and unexpectedly grows darker and darker as it progresses. It is actually a classic because it's good! XD

Not WK, but this morning I read a drunken Yohji in one of the best sex scenes ever written and saw Akihito in there in a different way. For AxA it had nothing to do with the sex though but the love because that is what these two are refusing to admit.

(I started to write a real strip tease, but then thought how would an annoyed Aki really strip and I had to put that in there, knowing Asami would treasure that far more than any practiced striptease. Inside he was falling off the couch laughing his ass off. ;P)

[runa93]

I don't know how much Asami is really denying anything. Akihito, obviously. Less denying, more 'no-idea-what-the-fuck-is-happening'. But for Asami, I don't know? Isn't he the 'non-denial' kind of guy? I think he's just trying to keep things as they are (Akihito with him, in his house, having sex etc etc) and not really naming it. (Maybe that's denying in its own way?) I guess the recent chapters made him realize that the status quo might actually be a little difficult to continue.

[sunflower1343]

Refusing to admit is completely different than denying. He doesn't deny anything to himself. But he will not tell Aki his feelings. And Aki knows his and won't admit them either.

[sueona]

Wow. Great work. Now only if Aki is more honest in the series and Asami, well I would love to see him open up some too. Guess it wouldn't be much of a story if they both opened up. Great work. Enjoy your stories.

[sunflower1343]

Maybe some day. I think sensei might show Takaba doing it, but there will always be a closed Asami and Takaba wondering about how he feels. Thanks!

[radcat38]

Awww.....that was so sweet. This is why I love VF and Asami and Akihito together as a couple.
Thank you Sunflower!!
Wonderful drabble.
I so needed it today!!
AND...so pleasant and so happy to see a new Sunflower story being created and shared with all of us.
A Happy Day and Surprise!!!
cat

[sunflower1343]

Thanks sweetie! *hugs*

[radcat38]

PS>I love Aki owning his love..drunk or not
And an Asami that allows himself to be loved and to get love and to allow himself his Aki.
Squee!!
c

[angelicazefiro]

Wow, wonderful tension, and the surprise of the peak not being the sex. Goody!

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! I think by now the sex is a bit commonplace for them and accepted, so the tension lies elsewhere.