[VF fic] Love Talker

Aug 04, 2014 22:47

Happy birthday to Asami. I thought I'd give him a present ( Read more... )

takaba, asami

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ickyickypoopoo August 5 2014, 05:24:24 UTC
Wow... Nice! I love happy ending. This so reminds me of the Meredith Gentry stories but better!

Thank you for sharing!

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sunflower1343 August 5 2014, 17:52:31 UTC
Thanks! Happy ending for happy birthday. :)

I haven't read any of those, though I read about the first ten Anita Blakes (they got a little too weird for me XD).

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ickyickypoopoo August 5 2014, 18:57:27 UTC
I've read most of the Anita Blake stories. I totally get you about it getting weird. The last book I read of the series was when Anita went to Las Vegas...

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princessoftor August 5 2014, 06:37:27 UTC
I like stories about the fair folk and I really liked this story. I can see Asami in this roll with Akihito as the mortal lover who saves him (with the power everybody keeps saying he has).

I'm guessing Asami's mother is Queen of the Unseelie and for him to finally step away it did take Aki's courage and love to allow him to do it.

There were a lot of little details that I really liked, the descriptions of the light fairies and dark fey. I laughed at the flaming ogre trying to find the lake to put himself out in.
I liked that Asami did give Aki his everything and Aki really did follow Asami to 'the abyss' yet brought them both back again.

Thank you so much for another wonderful story!

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sunflower1343 August 5 2014, 17:56:56 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment. You're right about Asami's mother- that's who she is and she's not a nice lady.

I saw a lot of images with this one while I was writing, like tiny fairies clinging to Aki's hair, and I wanted to share them.

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princessoftor August 5 2014, 21:33:25 UTC
I could picture those too!

Oh, and I know you're a fan of the Harry Dresden series as I am - so I'm sure Toot is waiting there somewhere to help (hehe)!

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sunflower1343 August 5 2014, 22:50:27 UTC
LOL! Toot will not be making an appearance. But I'm sure he reported in to Harry. (Asami and Marcone are buddies...)

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eprime August 5 2014, 16:21:20 UTC
Beautiful! Fae ancestry explains a lot. ;) I love this.

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sunflower1343 August 5 2014, 17:58:19 UTC
Thanks! He does seem otherworldly at times. :)

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kinslayers August 5 2014, 21:04:33 UTC
I saw it as a movie while I was reading it, very beautiful colors, feelings, thank you very much for sharing it! :D

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sunflower1343 August 5 2014, 22:49:29 UTC
Ha, I saw it as a movie in my head so it's funny you should say that. Thank you!

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lethalene August 5 2014, 21:40:50 UTC
Interesting story. I'm not into fae, but this is quite intriguing. Thank you for sharing.

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sunflower1343 August 5 2014, 22:52:57 UTC
Thanks! The love-talker myth is an interesting one. I think it was made up by guys who wanted to scare girls away from the handsome devil-may-care type of lover. XD But modern day takes often switch things up and they're really fun to read.

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