Comments | sung_gi: Relax and Enjoy

sung_gi

Relax and Enjoy

Dec 22, 2011 18:08

Title: Relax and Enjoy
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae, ninja!Leeteuk/Heechul
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 5020
Warning(s): Betaed by me, so there will be mistakes... and this is only my second attempt of writing smut, so bear with me :D
Summary: He knew it wasn't a good idea to go out with his hyung, but he had done that and there was no way he was going to ( Read more... )

fic: relax and enjoy, rating: nc-17, genre: smut, pairing: leeteuk/heechul, pairing: eunhyuk/donghae

Comments 9

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sung_gi December 22 2011, 16:58:51 UTC

Thank you!!^^
And yes, English is definitely NOT my first language :PP I'm trying to improve it though.... :))
I think Heechul was worried about his own safety but I'm happy if I managed to make him funny ;))
Thank you for reading and commenting!!! :DDD

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sung_gi December 22 2011, 19:47:02 UTC

FOUR LANGUAGES!? O.O Why so many? :''DD You'll survive with only English almost everywhere nowadays :)) Okay well, I've studied French (can't speak it) and I study also Swedish (can't speak it either)... and I'm trying to study Korean... :PP So if I could speak all of those languages it'd make it actually five because my mother language is Finnish... :D

I actually have a beta, veltana, but because this was a gift for her I didn't want her to beta this... I did the best I could...
But to be honest, I've been thinking that maybe it'd be good if I had a native speaker as my beta :))

Thank you, once again^^

veltana December 22 2011, 17:33:24 UTC

Alltså... felix is playing black ops so I can't concentrate but I'll read it later I promise xD when he is asleep ^^

sung_gi December 22 2011, 19:42:53 UTC

I'll be waiting to hear your comment <3

yeobo01 December 22 2011, 20:41:35 UTC

*____________________* me likey ~~

sung_gi December 22 2011, 21:39:00 UTC

Thank you dear!! :DDD

lola_nc December 23 2011, 03:32:21 UTC

its great, its not only smut, it has clear storyline, and the character looks real ^^

well done! I like the ending so much! XD

sung_gi December 23 2011, 10:31:04 UTC

I'm not that good at writing stuff WITHOUT a plot, even though I've tried to write that kinda stuff...!
But thank you :DD I'm glad you liked it XD

Thank you for reading and commenting^^

mjaku January 13 2012, 13:13:12 UTC

...i just had a nosebleed while sitting in a car.

That was fucking awesome. And i cracked up to the random corner xD It was just so comical when the scene got steamy and hot and THEN "AISH who the heck cares, lets throw the jeans to some RANDOM corner"
...i don't even know why it was so hilarious, i blame me being overtired xD