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Numb3rs : Cast Into

Oct 27, 2009 00:00

Title: Cast Into (When: Team Angst)
Author: (sunlesslands)
Pairing/Characters: Don Eppes/Larry Fleinhardt
Rating/Category: Mature/Slash
Spoilers: 6.04 “Credit’s Due”
Summary: Walking away from the beginning, thinking far too much and the taste of raspberries.
Notes/Warnings: Nearly, almost, possibly didn’t make it on time with this story. It took on a ( Read more... )

don, !numb3rswriteoff, larry, !numb3rs, don/larry

Comments 6

ladygray99 October 28 2009, 08:31:01 UTC

Lovely, slightly odd but lovely. Not nearly enough don/larry out there. the time jumps were slightly jarring but made sense on second reading. very nice.

sunlesslands October 28 2009, 21:17:58 UTC

Thank you very much, lovely! It was an interesting experiment and I think I'll end up taking it a bit farther in a remix or just massive revision sometime in the future.

ladygray99 October 29 2009, 07:18:44 UTC

Well I look forward to it. :)

anonymous October 28 2009, 10:20:15 UTC

This was really sweet. I think Colby is from Idaho, though, not Iowa.

sunlesslands October 28 2009, 21:19:46 UTC

Thank you very much for commenting. (And you're right, he is from Idaho and Larry is driving through Montana; he's not too concerned with maps, though). ;D

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sunlesslands October 29 2009, 18:16:01 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad to get more feedback on the tense shifting; it's my NaNo chew time this time round. And really, just, thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.