BEFORE THE FALL - fic, Hunger Games Trilogy, Haymitch/Maysilee

Jun 07, 2010 21:02

Rated T, for angst and profanity. Catching Fire spoilers. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

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Bonds are made to be broken.

The phrase scampers around his mind as Maysilee Donner saves his life and says “We’d live longer with the two of us.”

“Guess you just proved that.”

And, before he can sever their ties -

“Allies?”

They’ve already been knotted ( Read more... )

fanfic, hunger games trilogy

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kpop_fandom96 June 9 2010, 01:18:04 UTC
omg.omg.omg. You have no idea how much I wanted to see these 2 in a oneshot or smthing since reading HG2. They seemed like such a pair :) I;d got a feeling that if haymitch had the right mentor, these 2 would have been like katniss/peeta :( But this one is so sad... But i kinda expected it :) HG is a sad sad game. I like the relationship u made them have here, it seems real and feasible, especially for smone like Haymitch. Thumbs up!

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sunlight_kisses June 9 2010, 03:30:17 UTC
Haha, same here! The sad lack of Haymitch/Maysilee fic was what really drove me to write this :)

Thank you so much for your comment and kind words!

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shabgt June 10 2010, 09:36:29 UTC
I love this so much! it's sad, the things between Maysilee and Haymitch. with this story, well it's clear why Haymitch doesn't go married after all this time.
and I think it's one of the reason why he makes Peeta and Katniss become a couple. to remembering how he and Maysilee back then and to laugh at Capitol idiotic games.

good, really good.

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sunlight_kisses June 11 2010, 00:29:33 UTC
Yes, I think Haymitch was never really the husband-type to being with but after experiencing the Hunger Games .... any ideas of family and marriage must be ridiculous.

I'm glad you liked this :) Thank you for commenting!

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shabgt June 14 2010, 11:13:19 UTC
the husband-drunker-type maybe. or maybe, he's drunk because of Hunger Games. I think Katniss would be like him (maybe) if Peeta died.

It's okay, keep writing!

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bdweller June 11 2010, 11:32:27 UTC
Wow. I thought I was good, but this blows me out of the water something fierce.

It's so sad, you know, and so very, very like Haymitch. You've captured the character wonderfully, which always leaves me impressed when I see other people do it, because I'm always the one who goes OOCing all over the show.

Anyways,

LOVEY, LOVELY, LOVELY.

:)

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sunlight_kisses June 12 2010, 07:24:42 UTC
I think I've taken a few liberties with Haymitch here, because this Haymitch is in a different environment from the Haymitch we've seen in The Hunger Games and Catching Fire. Characterization is something I've been working on lately, so I'm happy it seemed to be in-character. :)

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH, for your kind words and comment <3

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redbrunja June 12 2010, 04:42:47 UTC
This was awesome.

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sunlight_kisses June 12 2010, 07:25:15 UTC
Thank you <3

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century_fox March 22 2012, 01:40:54 UTC
HEARTS IN MY EYES THIS IS AMAZING

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sunlight_kisses March 25 2012, 22:31:41 UTC
THANK YOU FOR THE KIND WORDS <3

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