PERFECTION IN LOSS - fic, ichiruki

[sunlight_kisses]

A / N :

WARNINGS! Cursing. AND ANGST. REALLY, TOTALLY, ANGSTY - ANGST. Originally, this piece started out as a kind of five senses vignette series thing but that just ... failed, LOL. I was cleaning out my laptop, found this, and was fairly surprised to find it decent-ish as it was. A few fixes here and there but otherwise okay.

If any errors are

Comments

[woodrokiro]

This was... outstanding. Seriously, beautiful and eery wrapped into one.

Awesome job.

[sunlight_kisses]

Thank you so much ! <3

[zankoku_angel]

Beautifully written. A little creepy, and pretty heartbreaking. And no, it wasn't too confusing -- just enough to keep me reading until it became clear what was going on. Nice work.

[sunlight_kisses]

Thank you for your review ! I'm glad my writing wasn't too confusing :)

[woodwind]

Absolutely beautiful. I love the way you write.

[sunlight_kisses]

Thank you so much <3