Dollhouse Fic: Of Sea Creatures and Underwater Rescues

Oct 16, 2010 18:07

Title: Of Sea Creatures and Underwater Rescues (Or The First Of Five Times Adelle DeWitt Saved Laurence Dominic From An Unfortunate, Embarrassing, or Fatal Situation)
Rating: PG
Pairing: DeWitt/Dominic
Word Count: 1052
Notes: Written for the Sweet Drabblethon, for the always lovely derevko_child
Prompt: DeWitt/Dominic - in case of emergency
More Notes: This ( Read more... )

fic, fic: dollhouse, dewitt/dominic

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derevko_child October 17 2010, 02:54:56 UTC
Ahaha! OMG, this is awesome *hugssss* I love it. Adelle pretending to be drunk, flirting with Dominic while pretending to be drunk, the lack of personal space. Heee. And of course, Adelle's power of telepathy.

As they exited in their usual practiced yet comfortable fashion, Laurence again found himself wondering what a $12,000 bottle of wine tasted like.

KISS HER, DOM.

Aww. Thanks so much. I <3

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derevko_child October 17 2010, 03:55:04 UTC
Also, I like what you're selling and I want to buy it.

Good to see you back in LJ XDDDDDDDDDDd

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sunney October 17 2010, 20:51:58 UTC
YAY! I'm so happy you liked it!! And you're very welcome! Thank you for the prompt :D It's been a while since I've written them, so I was feeling a little iffy about their voices. I realized how much I miss them while writing this though. I really gotta get those DVDs!

> KISS HER, DOM.

HE BETTER!! C'MON AND TAKE A HINT DOM! OR ADELLE MAY HAVE TO TAKE MATTERS INTO HER OWN HANDS!

> Also, I like what you're selling and I want to buy it.

Heehee! Excellent! I'll get right on it!

> Good to see you back in LJ XDDDDDDDDDDd

Aww, thanks! :D I just have to get back into the posting and commenting groove, especially since I actually have things to post about, lol.

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morgan72uk October 17 2010, 07:55:19 UTC
This is fabulous. On its own or as part of a set. Love the pace of it and the banter. Very well done.

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sunney October 17 2010, 20:52:49 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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pathosical October 24 2010, 05:14:11 UTC
This is absolutely wonderful. I love Adelle's rescue and just general awesomeness.

Also definitely buying what you're selling :D

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sunney February 13 2011, 03:44:57 UTC
This comment is terribly late, but better late than never right? Anyhow, I wanted to thank you for buying what I'm selling ;) I do plan to continue it, and I know where it's going. I just have to write it! lol.

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rogoblue October 24 2010, 14:41:59 UTC

"Mr. Dominic, are you praying?"

It's been a while since I've laughed out loud at a line both unexpected and perfect. Thanks for sharing.

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sunney February 13 2011, 03:47:06 UTC
No, I have not been lost at sea. I am just terribly behind in commenting. Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I'm glad to have made you laugh :)

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lalenapeike October 25 2010, 05:36:25 UTC
This is awesome!! Either as a standalone or as a part.

They are too adorable. Love this couple. Thank you for this! <3

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sunney February 13 2011, 03:48:07 UTC
My apologies for commenting so late. Thank you though for your comment, I'm so very glad you found it fun to read :)

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