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Mar 03, 2013 02:15

Title: Storm Tossed Treasures 1/?
Fandom: Original
Relationship: Memories of m/m
Author: SunnyD_lite
Prompt: Avulsion
WordCount: 675
A/N: It's harlequin-esque. Sorry about that.
He'd remembered just enough of his high school English classes to laugh at the pathetic fallacy of it all. )

stormtossed, tamingthemuse

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pssnfrt_ksss March 3 2013, 12:17:21 UTC
Never apologise for harlequin-esque. Harlequin-esque is wonderful, and you write it beautifully. I am intrigued and looking forward to finding out what happens next.

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sunnyd_lite March 4 2013, 03:25:03 UTC
If I can leave you wanting more...I win! Thanks so much for reading & commenting.

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thismaz March 3 2013, 14:13:35 UTC
It's the obscure prompts that produce the best stories and this one, harlequin-esque or not, is very nice.
In so few words, you drew a vivid picture of teenage love lost and regretted. And then you finished it off with such a perfect piece of promise.
Very nice, hon.

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sunnyd_lite March 4 2013, 03:25:41 UTC
*blush* Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

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enigmaticblues March 3 2013, 16:33:50 UTC
Very interesting beginning to the story. I liked it.

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sunnyd_lite March 4 2013, 03:26:45 UTC
Yays! Thanks for reading & commenting. Glad you liked.

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