Comments | sunnyd_lite: Another Chapter of "Stormed Tossed Treasures"

sunnyd_lite

Another Chapter of "Stormed Tossed Treasures"

Mar 09, 2013 23:58

Title: Storm Tossed Treasures 2/?
Fandom: Original
Relationship: Memories of m/m
Author: SunnyD_lite
Prompt: Non-Sequiturs
Word Count: 993
( That chased her clouds away. If only everything was fixed so easily. )

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Comments 5

thismaz March 10 2013, 12:41:09 UTC

I was expecting chapter 2 to pick up where chapter 1 left off, but I really liked this picture of Justin's life before the meeting at the tree.
It's not just Carl who feels the loss, then. Not just Carl who thinks of could-have-beens.
Justin has a good mother and a good lieutenant in Susan. He has a good life. I love that it is enough... most of the time. *g*
Very nice.

sunnyd_lite March 12 2013, 01:10:57 UTC

I'm glad that I was able to properly depict Justin's world in this short piece - thank you so much for reading & commenting I do love your comments! *hugs them*

thismaz July 26 2013, 05:09:29 UTC

Hey hon!
I just popped by to wish you a very happy birthday.
May you have cake and presents and joy of the day.

enigmaticblues March 10 2013, 15:29:23 UTC

I do really like this. All of the characters seem very three-dimensional in such a short period of time.

sunnyd_lite March 12 2013, 01:11:34 UTC

praise from you for characterization is golden! Thanks for reading & commenting.