LJ Idol 11 Week 3

[sunouttomorrow]

He didn’t remember how or when it all started, just that it had been his for a long, long time. He wasn’t sure if he even had a memory of when it wasn’t a part of him. The wooden handle had become worn, his hand and fingers almost imprinted on it. The forged steel head gleamed. It always did on account of all the cleaning he had to do to it.

His

Comments

[tsuki_no_bara]

well this was disturbing! i like how it's very clear what's going on, even tho the language is kind of vague. and it's very gory for being so short.

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you. I'm glad the brevity worked.

[banana_galaxy]

Yikes! As others have said, this was pretty disturbing!

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you.

[ellison]

Eeeeek, this is so scary and disturbing! Well done scaring the crap out of everyone, ha! :D The word choices you made really had a powerful impact. Well crafted!

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you.