LJ Idol Week 13

[sunouttomorrow]

She should have listened to her grandmother.

Her whole life had been spent defying the old traditions, scoffing at the superstitions, and ignoring the warnings from her elders. She wasn’t disrespectful about it. In fact, she humored Grandmother when she was with her and did what she wanted when she wasn’t.

It was all coming back at her now. Karma

Comments

[static_abyss]

Yikes. Poor lady. All she wanted was to survive the heat. Great piece. It was perfectly eerie.

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you. She was just trying to find some relief from the heat. I'm glad it was eerie. That's what I was aiming for.

[kittenboo]

Well done, pulled me right in from the first sentence!

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you. I'm glad it worked. First sentences are the ones I try to pay most attention to.

[d0gs]

Loved reading this - I was drawn in from the first line!

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you. I try to make sure those first sentences really draw readers in.

[bleodswean]

It is best to listen to your grandmother. LOL. Lots of great action here!

[sunouttomorrow]

Yes, it is. Thank you. I hope the description of the "demon" was as vivid in words as it was in my imagination.

[nikkiii_brown]

Freaky!! Great job and perfect take on the topic!

[sunouttomorrow]

Thank you. The topic really lent itself to a supernatural tie in.