Resolution 6/?

[sunrize83]

By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Summary: For two weeks he'd been living on edge, desperate to fill the blanks in his memory, terrified of what he might see if he did. It was every bit the horror show he’d imagined. Post-ep for Born Under a Bad Sign.
Word Count: 2,534 (this chapter)
Author's note: Hope everyone's still with me

Comments

[harrigan]

I'm delighted to see you're still moving forward with this ... but have to confess I'm commenting without reading it because I want to wait till it's finished!

So - this isn't constructive or anything, sorry - but hopefully encouraging!

[sunrize83]

This is very encouraging--thank you! And I completely understand about waiting for the story to be finished because that's generally what I do, as well. Thanks for cheering me along while you do!

[authoressnebula]

Holy CRAP.

More more more.

That's all I can really say, because protective!Dean is exactly what I needed and has me bouncing happily but biting my lip in anxiousness for Sammy.

Moremoremoremoremore

~Nebula

[sunrize83]

Thank you! I'm glad I've got you on the edge of your seat. I'll try to have more soon.

[faunaana]

I'm enjoying this very much. Nice descriptive language and its an interesting disconnect between the brothers.

[sunrize83]

I really appreciate the comment about my choice of language--thank you. I'm afraid the disconnect is going to get a bit worse before it gets better!

[leenys]

keep going, keep going. . .

[sunrize83]

I am, I promise! Thanks for the encouragement.

[iamstealthyone]

Another good chapter, dear! I love how you open with Sam’s very intense vision, and then how it’s just close enough to that scene in BUaBS that Dean makes the wrong assumption when Sam tells him about it.

Favorite lines:

The shotgun comes up, aimed at his chest.

Eek! Brothers shouldn’t aim guns at each other! Eek!

He’s out of the chair while Dean’s still fumbling to stand, reeling from whatever knocked him off his feet. Arm looped around his brother’s neck, he applies pressure, ignoring the way Dean’s limbs first flail, then gradually still.

Eek! Brothers shouldn’t choke each other! Eek!

*tells self it has to be for a good reason*

Bright lights, cold tile, the sour odor of urine all assaulted his senses,

Good details.

Was this it? Had Meg been the catalyst, his first step down the path toward the dark side?

Poor Sam, unable to let go of the idea that he’s going evil.

Sam took the bag, warmth from the container of soup heating his palm.

Good detail. Little things like this really put the reader into the scene.

“Dude

[sunrize83]

Again, thanks for all your help with this one. I've got the next started but we picked up the new puppy yesterday. Oy. It really is like having another baby. :) But he's absolutely adorable.

[iamstealthyone]

Yay, puppy! Have fun with the little guy. :) (Send me a pic when you can.)