SN Fic: Who We Are Instead

May 08, 2009 21:54

By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Summary: Everything that made his little brother good and real and Sam was slipping away. And the more he tightened his grip, tried to hold on, the more Sam slipped through his fingers. Missing scene for Jump the Shark.
Word Count: 3,821
Author's note: This story is the result of a desperate ( Read more... )

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embroiderama May 9 2009, 12:22:45 UTC
I like this a lot--it's a missing scene I wish we could have seen for real. Dean's trick of talking Sam through pain rang especially true.

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sunrize83 May 9 2009, 15:20:41 UTC
Thank you. It's great to hear you mention the Dean talking Sam through pain bit because that was one of my favorite parts. Glad you enjoyed this!

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kokoda2007 May 9 2009, 14:06:50 UTC
Perfect! Just what I needed :)

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sunrize83 May 9 2009, 15:21:17 UTC
Thank you! Glad to be of service. This was therapeutic for me too.

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contrary_lady May 9 2009, 17:56:40 UTC
That was just perfect!

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sunrize83 May 9 2009, 18:11:24 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad it worked for you.

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sirnonenath May 9 2009, 19:01:11 UTC
Nice job of portraying the concern Dean has for Sam intermixed with his misgivings about his changing relationship with him. Fits in with the show perfectly.

Thanks for sharing. I'm saving the link!

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sunrize83 May 12 2009, 01:39:21 UTC
I'm really glad to hear this. It was a challenge to provide some comfort while still fitting in with where the boys are on the show. Glad I got it right!

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may7fic May 9 2009, 20:41:58 UTC
Very nicely done and perfectly fitting with the ep. Oh, boys!

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sunrize83 May 12 2009, 01:40:37 UTC
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, the boys are breaking me right now. I hope things improve soon, but knowing Kripke, I fear we're in for a terrible cliffhanger.

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