Fic: Arms of an Angel

Dec 09, 2006 11:12

This fic is a Secret Santa gift for Joella over on the SFTCOL(AR)S board. She wanted an add-on to Bloody Mary covering the next 24 hours in the boys' lives. Merry Christmas, Joella! Hope you enjoy this. More soon.

Arms of an Angel (1/4)
By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Description: Though he'd never flinched from his ( Read more... )

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harrigan December 9 2006, 19:04:12 UTC
Add-on's can be such fun!

You really have Dean's banter down pat. And Sam's introspection too. Like:

>> It amazed Sam how well his brother could read his every mood and expression. It was only recently he'd come to appreciate that was something Dean had been doing all Sam's life.

Looking forward to the next installment!

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sunrize83 December 9 2006, 22:58:45 UTC
Thank you. One of the things I really concentrated on was trying to make Dean sound like Dean. It's great to hear you think I got it right!

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ongiara December 9 2006, 20:15:52 UTC
I love how rich your writing is, how well you balance and thread in the events from the episode (like the Charlie reference etc), the angst, the humor and how on spot your characterization is. Sam's dealing, hurting - is haunted -, and Dean is just the right amount of big brother awesomeness and sarcastic as we know him.
Great work! *craves for more*

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sunrize83 December 9 2006, 22:59:56 UTC
I'm so glad you're enjoying this. You've just put a big smile on my face with your lovely feedback. I'm already at work on the next installment, so hopefully you'll be seeing it soon. Thanks so much!

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sunrize83 December 9 2006, 23:01:16 UTC
Thank you! Writing the brotherly interaction is my favorite part, and really, it's what hooked me into the show. More within the next few days, I hope.

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mackeygenius December 10 2006, 00:43:24 UTC
Dean looked at him as if he'd suggested a threesome. With Missouri.

Talk about cutting through the dramatic tension. *cackles*

Fantastic fic. Eagerly/impatiently waiting for more.

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sunrize83 December 11 2006, 02:00:20 UTC
::snickers:: I have to give credit where credit is due--that came from the warped mind of my beta. So glad you're enjoying this. More very soon.

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iamstealthyone December 11 2006, 04:00:31 UTC
Hey! Who are you calling warped? *snickers*

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sunrize83 December 11 2006, 04:08:16 UTC
But...but...I said it with a great deal of love and admiration. ::bats eyelashes::

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sunrize83 December 11 2006, 02:00:52 UTC
Thank you! I'm already halfway through the next section, so you should see more soon.

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