Fic: Arms of an Angel

[sunrize83]

Arms of an Angel (2/4)
By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Description: Though he'd never flinched from his responsibility for Jess's death, the idea she herself might blame him was an even more bitter pill to swallow. Takes place immediately after "Bloody Mary."
Author's note: Many thanks to iamstealthyone for dotting my i's and crossing my t

Comments

[sunrize83]

Thanks! Next part is already in beta, and should post sometime later today. It's great to hear you're anxiously waiting for it.

[sunrize83]

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. Things are heating up. The next bit should post later today.

[snfan3]

oh no! you can't leave it there!!!! lol - that was awesome!

Keep up the great writing - can't wait to read the rest :p

[sunrize83]

Hee hee! Cliffhangers are cruel, aren't they? But don't worry, you'll get the next installment later today. I'm so glad I've got you on the edge of your seat. :)

[iamstealthyone]

Great chapter. I really like the little twist that Sam isn’t the only one seeing Jess, and I’m curious to see exactly what she’s up to.

Good job conveying Sam’s physical and emotional angst, and I also liked Dean’s worry and determination to get back to Sam right freakin’ now.

Favorite lines:

Switching the box of crackers, bag of peanut M&Ms, and six-pack of beer to his left arm.

Dean and his M&Ms. *g*

Shopping carts were for wimps. And don't even get him started on those girly little plastic baskets

*snickers*

He'd expected Sam to hurt over Jess's death--they'd been shacked up together, after all. He'd just never anticipated the depth with which his brother would grieve over her.

I really like this, because I’m sure it took Dean awhile to really appreciate just how much Sam loved Jess.

"Would you like to put your things in my cart

[sunrize83]

*hugs* You rock, you know that? Your feedback never ceases to put a big Sammy grin on my face (or is that a Jared grin?--not sure). I'm so glad you're coming along for the ride on this one.

[iamstealthyone]

*hugs* You rock, you know that?

I know. It's so hard to be me. *sighs*

Your feedback never ceases to put a big Sammy grin on my face (or is that a Jared grin?--not sure).

Least I can do in return for such a great story. :)

[depulvis]

Only Dean could make insults feel like a hug.

That is the best line ever.

[sunrize83]

*blushes* Thank you so much. And it's true, isn't it? Dean's gruff, tough-guy attitude hides such a cream puff underneath. More of this later today.

[depulvis]

Yes, it is. I just never thought of it in terms of insults equaling hugs. (Although my sister and I do it all the time.) Did you notice, in "Nightmare," after Dean's just finished isulting Sam's shining and Sam walks away in disgust, the look Dean gives him? That look alone probably inspired all the wincest! It was like a non-physical hug!

[sunrize83]

I adore that look from Nightmare. Makes me hit rewind every time. :)