Magnificent 7 Fic: Worth It (1/4)

[sunrize83]

By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Vin, Chris
Summary: When does the cost become too high?
Word Count: 11,410
Author's note: Dabbling in another fandom in a desperate attempt to break a nasty case of writer's block. Unbeta'd, so all the mistakes are mine.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations portrayed here aren't mine. This story is

Comments

[iamstealthyone]

Exciting start to the story! I like the tension in that phone call as Chris realizes something’s really wrong. And you did a good job conveying Vin’s pain even though it’s Chris’ POV.

Favorite lines:

"You call 911?" Chris had his shirt on now, was reaching for keys and wallet. "Vin?"

"Don' wanna...get 'im in trouble."

Vin’s such a softie.

Chris heard scuffling, followed by a muffled gasp. "You comin' soon?"

This dialogue makes me ache for Vin. You can hear how much he wants Chris there. *hugs Vin*

"I ever tell you about the time Buck tried to date triplets? Damn fool thought he could keep 'em all on a string at the same time..."

*g* Buck, Buck, Buck. *snickers*

Suddenly everything shattered into disjointed sounds and images: the brisk tattoo of footsteps and metallic rattle of a gurney; hands, easing Vin from his lap, nudging Chris aside; rapid-fire questions Chris did his best to answer.

Great description.

It was Team 7's talismen, a mantra they spoke whenever one of them was hurt--kind of like making the sign of the