Supernatural Fic: Resolution 2/?

[sunrize83]

By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Summary: For two weeks he'd been living on edge, desperate to fill the blanks in his memory, terrified of what he might see if he did. It was every bit the horror show he’d imagined. Post-ep for Born Under a Bad Sign.
Word Count: 2,796 (this chapter)
Author's note: I forgot to mention that I'm

Comments

[faunaana]

Whoa - intense! I'm enjoying Sam's PTSD, here. Wait, that sounds weird! I mean, I like your writing of it. You know what I mean. I also enjoy Dean's desire to help, yet not knowing how to navigate it. Oh, boys. Excited to see what happens next.

[sunrize83]

Hee hee! I know exactly what you mean, and I'm really glad to hear you like what I'm doing with this story. And thanks for the comment about Dean. I was trying hard to capture his mindset during this time period. It's great to hear that's working for you.

[joyofreading]

[sunrize83]

Thank you. I'm really glad you're enjoying this. BUABS is an ep that left me really wanting more, wanting to see how Sam--and Dean--would cope with the fallout. Because you're right, those events affected Dean almost as deeply as they did Sam. Thanks for the feedback!

[iamstealthyone]

Such yummy angst here, dear. *pets the yummy angst*

Poor Sam, tormented by the things he remembers, and I feel bad for Dean, too, who wants to make everything all better but can’t.

I’m very intrigued to see what happens in the next chapter, when they go see Jo.

Favorite lines:

When he came out of the bathroom, Sam had quieted, sprawled on his stomach with his face mashed in the pillow the way he only slept when truly exhausted or drunk.

Good detail/character insight.

Dean had the uncomfortable sense of speeding toward a head-on collision with no hope of turning the wheel.

Great description.

For a moment Sam resisted, all rigid spine and sharp elbows, then he leaned into Dean’s side.

Good description, and I really like this image of Sam accepting some comfort.

“It wasn’t you, Sam.” It sounded empty, even to him, but what the hell.

I like that Dean says this but realizes it’s not going to make things all better.

From Sam’s horrified reaction, you’d have thought he’d suggested torturing small animals. Poor Sam. Of course he

[sunrize83]

Thanks, hon, as always for your amazing feedback. And for your amazing beta. In this chapter, especially, you caught some things that really made it a stronger section. Thank you so much for that.

[iamstealthyone]

You're welcome, for everything. :) It's always a pleasure beta reading and commenting on your fic. I'm glad I could help! *hugs*

[anonymous]

Ow. Just, owww. This is believable and well written. Oh, Sam. Making him hurt a woman like that is about the worst thing she could have done to him, and poor Dean wanting to help but not being able to.

I'm really enjoying this story so far- it's nice to have SPN fic from you again.

[sunrize83]

Aw, thanks for that word about seeing a fic from me again. It's really nice to be back. There's nothing worse than having your muse pack up and take an extended vacation. It's good to have her back on the job! Thanks for your feedback.

[sunrize83]

Thank you! Glad you like.