Resolution 5/?

May 05, 2008 16:53

By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Summary: For two weeks he'd been living on edge, desperate to fill the blanks in his memory, terrified of what he might see if he did. It was every bit the horror show he’d imagined. Post-ep for Born Under a Bad Sign.
Word Count: 2,416 (this chapter)
Author's note: So sorry for the delay in ( Read more... )

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bb1128 May 5 2008, 22:43:57 UTC
Great chapter! Poor Sam's really not doing so hot, huh? But I love how Dean's been with him, trying to get him to eat, and just being *Dean* great big brother that he is.

Really can't wait to read more of this, and see what's going to happen next :)

Take care, beth xx

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sunrize83 May 8 2008, 15:05:18 UTC
Sam is indeed having a very hard time. I can't imagine what it would be like to know a force had used your body to do terrible things. I'm so glad you're enjoying this. More soon!

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mlebayre May 5 2008, 22:57:35 UTC
Ohhh great chapter!

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sunrize83 May 8 2008, 15:05:33 UTC
Thank you! Glad you like.

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harrigan May 5 2008, 23:25:01 UTC
That seemed way shorter than it really was! (Which maybe doesn't sound like a compliment, but it is. This just flowed so nicely, steadily, completely engrossing, and all too soon it was over!)

Now that the birthdays are over, I hope you find more time to write soon!

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sunrize83 May 8 2008, 15:06:26 UTC
Hee hee! I knew what you meant by the short comment. And thank you. You actually said just the right thing because I was a little concerned about the pacing here. I'm so glad to hear this bit flew by for you.

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authoressnebula May 5 2008, 23:26:47 UTC
I love how you write Dean. I love how you write Sam, but I especially love how you're writing Dean with this, because Dean wouldn't coddle unless it was damn serious; he'd be annoyed and irked about Sam not eating, but deep down, he'd be damn concerned. I love how you got that through.

And trust me, I know how the birthday parties can go. I've got a college graduation in a few days and the prep work for the party afterwards is getting insane.

Can't wait for more!

~Nebula

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sunrize83 May 8 2008, 15:08:19 UTC
Thank you so much. I really love writing Dean because I love the way he sees Sam, his gruff yet iron-clad love for his brother. It's so great to hear you think I got it right.

And yeah, we're preparing for a high school graduation around here. Lots of work ahead, and I'm still in shock that my little boy is headed for college. Seems like I just blinked and he grew!

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joyofreading May 5 2008, 23:45:56 UTC
sunrize83 May 8 2008, 15:08:57 UTC
Glad I've got you guessing. More soon, I promise. Thanks for the feedback.

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