Soul Dreamer Part 4/4

Jun 22, 2011 01:39

Title: Soul Dreamer
Artist: squarededdie
Author: sunryder
Rating (both art/fic): G/PG-13 (curse words)
Genre/Pairing: Action, Gen
Word Count: 18,290
Warnings: The occasional curse word

Fic Summary: They were supposed to be on shore leave, so explain how Spock ended up mentally adopted a kid and Jim was making nice with Godzilla.
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fic: soul dreamer, fic: star trek

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lilyoftheval5 June 22 2011, 12:46:16 UTC
You just want the chance to tell her one last time that you love her, and she brought you joy, that's all. Every way that the universe has wronged you, and all you want is to tell her that she was adored.

*wailed like a baby*

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sunryder July 7 2011, 04:54:52 UTC
Thank you so much!

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kcscribbler June 22 2011, 15:12:55 UTC
You want your mother. Not your planet, or your culture, not even to have her back forever. You just want the chance to tell her one last time that you love her, and she brought you joy, that's all. Every way that the universe has wronged you, and all you want is to tell her that she was adored. *cries* Has to be the best-put and saddest line in any XI fanfic I've ever read. *cried like a baby*

This has been a spectacular way to spend a half-hour. I still can't quite believe just how much I enjoyed this story; I may go read it again. You've inspired my sluggish muse into action again with this; for that and for the enjoyment, I thank you.

Please say you're going to write this universe again soon! *puppy eyes* Imma friend you in the hopes you do. :) Thank you again!

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sunryder July 7 2011, 04:59:16 UTC
Thank you ever so much! The best thing a writer can hear is that they've inspired someone else to join in the fun! Thank you for these kind words, they've meant the world to me.

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squarededdie June 23 2011, 01:35:39 UTC
This was absolutely enthralling. The wit and down to earth feel you gave the characters had me grinning and squirming with glee through out the whole story. To go on and include a serious commentary on child molestation after all the remarks you got the characters to say regarding similar issues in the beginning was intriguing; it fit in well, and was very Star Trek.
Also, your Metron and Harry were wonderful... bravo with the rebooting! Really great how you didn't make him too sinister. Any interest in writing him again? Wow, um... I can go on like this forever but I'll leave it with a sincere thank you very much. Let our paths cross once again, sometime.

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sunryder July 7 2011, 05:04:46 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I kept pushing myself trying to get to a point where I felt like I was doing your brilliant work some semblance of justice. I feel like I fell short of what your work deserved but I can only say that I did my best and I'm so happy you liked it. You gave me such a unique combination of characters to play with that I'll be grateful you introduced them to my imagination. For you, I would write anything again and I'll cheat the system to get our paths to cross, though hopefully next time I'll have the full four months to do your work justice.

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squarededdie July 8 2011, 08:27:58 UTC
Your story was fabulous; incredible you were able to deliver it within a few weeks. Shows how good you are with juggling ideas and storytelling. I'll be looking forward to your future work. Hehehe, here's in hope for another collaboration! *raises pint*

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leonie_alastair June 27 2011, 16:07:37 UTC
Great story. I loved the plot and the character interactions, and the ending was just lovely.

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sunryder July 7 2011, 05:08:34 UTC
Thank you ever so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

Sorry about the reply delay, posting for RBB was actually the dying act of my laptop and I've been cut off from lj since.)

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ushi85 July 3 2011, 15:32:23 UTC
loved it all ^_^

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sunryder July 7 2011, 05:09:07 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

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