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Fic: Indulgence

Jun 20, 2011 18:42

Title: Indulgence
Pairing: Erik/Charles
Word Count: 2863
Rating: PG, eventual R
Disclaimer: I own nothing :(
Summary: Erik finds he has a soft spot for the young mutants at the mansion, and it leads him to indulging them when he knows Charles would disapprove. When Charles finds out, he decides he and Erik need to have a little chat. Yep, bottom!Erik ( Read more... )

Comments 5

dreaminghour June 21 2011, 02:56:00 UTC

Maybe this is the wrong reaction, but I can only laugh at poor Erik. Nice. :)

trifota June 21 2011, 03:35:43 UTC

(/fans self)

I...Um..Well...

That's really hot. <3

Charles is really devilish here, a loving master with a winked, winked mind. But I dont think Erik would complain...much.

(I agree wholeheartly that bottom!Erik is hotter than the sun, too bad that's so rare around here. >.<)

fatal_drum June 21 2011, 21:25:31 UTC

Fucking fantastic! You make me want to write top!Charles all day every day. x333 It's also fun to see Erik as the permissive parent. I can imagine him trying to cut the boys all the slack he never got.

I love that for all Erik's submission, it's his rebellious streak that really gets Charles off. The whole scene between the two of them was deftly written and made me crave me.

And “What the hell, Charles -“ made me giggle like mad.

blueberee June 28 2011, 06:24:52 UTC

I can't stop giggling at the parenting blues.
But I did 'cause my jaw dropped the moment I knew Charles was going to be all commando-ish on this one.
Yeah I resumed giggling when Erik was panicking.
I mean Erik. No metal in sight. :))))))dfskj!

havok1278 September 1 2011, 03:00:10 UTC

Wow, this was well done

I'm not use to seeing Charles in charge, pardon the pun

I like that side of him and you had me hooked from the first paragraph with your writing style. I hope I get to read more work by you if you're still around and doing X Men fic.