Sunlight in a Dark Room - Chapter 15

[sunshine_melodi]

Title: Sunlight in a Dark Room
Author: Chapter
Chapter: 15/? - Possession
Pairing: Itachi/Naruto
Wordcount: 4607
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto.

Author’s Note: A sweet and wonderful thank you goes to my beta, a_scattered_me for her hard work at helping me get this chapter out. OMG! It's been so long. I'm very sorry for the lateness. A mad

Comments

[sunshine_melodi]

Thank you!

I'm so glad you liked it. I was actually pretty worried about the content. It felt lacking or something. =0

Haha. Sasuke needs some growing up to do. XD

*laughs* Sasori and Deidara...can be whatever you want it to be. ;) I've left any sidepairings for the readers to figure out. :P

Your icon is so much love. *heart*

[sunshine_melodi]

See? I totally knew I was missing something. A lot of the skipping happened because I ran out of things to write...s'one of the reasons why I had such a difficult time writing it. -_-;

My style is simple, I think. I've been told that so I assume so. Haha. I'd love to learn to be more descriptive with things because I've seen other author's works and they're just fantastic. 8D I'd love to be able to write well one day. :D

Thank you for the critique. They always help me improve. ;D

LOL. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke. So emo. 8D

OMG! I'd love the full size image. 8D Please do send. *hugs*

:D

[lechimie]

Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.

Re: :D

[sunshine_melodi]

You're welcome.

And Thank you. I'm happy you liked it. ^^

[pervert_bitch]

Man, I just read all this in one go! :P
Good good characterizations and development (specially in the ItaNaru relationship!)
What worries me know is Sasuke's reaction to the ItaNaru. I mean of course it would hurt when he sees the one he loves with someone else but I think he would have eventually got over it... but to lose Naruto to his brother? The one who caused him so much suffering and ruining his life? Hell, even Itachi acknowledges it. That is soooo serious angst in the making!!! :P

[sunshine_melodi]

Wow! That's a lot to read in one go.

You're awesome. 8DDDD

And thank you! I'm so happy you like the story so far. The ItaNaru are the hardest parts to write. I never know just how OOC or IC I'm making them. You made me feel so much better about it. ^____^

Yus. I'm actually worried about Sasuke too. I haven't really thought out what exactly I'm going to be doing with him. D: Poor guy. :P Angst is about though...probably. :P

[a_scattered_me]

hi honey
Got your email - I'm shit-deep in deadlines currently (to the point of panic attacks) so is it alright if I read through your chapter sometime next week? Didn't want you to think I was ignoring you or anything! *sheepish look*
Hope you're doing well. xx

[sunshine_melodi]

Wah! Deadlines. *hugs*

That's okay. I'm just getting settled into school so I won't want to post for a little while. Definitely, no prob. ;D

I am doing well. Thank ya. ;D

Good luck with your deadlines!!!