NCIS - fanfiction: When I Look At You

[sunshine_sean]

Fandom: NCIS
Author: Steph
Rating: teen
Genre: angst, hurt/comfort
Spoilers: none
Summary: Sometimes you notice things simply by looking at someone.

AN: This is just a tiny little one-shot with not even 500 words. It came to mind yesterday when I was kinda unaccountable. Grammar might suck and the story is not that well structured. It's not beta-ed. I

Comments

[lierina]

Hi sweetie,

you know that I usually don't read english fanfictions (blame my English for it... or tha lack of time, as usual) but I did read yours and I really enjoyed it! Which, of course, wasn't a big surprise because I know that your writing is always profound and meaningful. It may be just a "tiny little one-shot" but I really like it.
(please don't ask me for grammar and correct spelling - your English is much better than mine ;-)

Btw, did you post it in an ncis ff comm, too? To give people a chance to see it?

♥ Irina

[sunshine_sean]

Hey Irina,

thanks for the review. It really made me happy to see that you broke your promise not to read english fanfiction just because of me. That definitely makes me proud so much more (I should seriously consider hanging a hundredweight of lead onto my feet or I might get off the ground ;-))

To answer your question, I posted the story to ff.net and ncisfic.com (and yes, I know that there aren't to be too many reviews expected), but I haven't made it to posting the story to any other lj community. Not yet at least. I may as soon as possible. You know, I'm review-addicted and can't waste a chance of sharing my stories *laughs*

♥ Sunshine

[no_name_product]

awwww... wicked xD
no seriously its kinda sad but cute and u know what I mean?! :P
ok well its great, man! theres nothing else to say! ;)

[sunshine_sean]

Short (and it took you quite some time ;) but I'll thank you anyway =)

*hugs*

[yanjara]

Nice, definitively. The theme was an interesting one and I especially liked the twist you got into at the end.
Well, you know, that I don't know much about NCIS, but what you've told me ;), but I heard your voice shining through this, was it Tony, because it sure as hell felt like the impression you gave me of him.
<3

[sunshine_sean]

You've got it right, my little zombie-girl ;)

Maybe I should get on your nerves about watching NCIS with you sometime. I know you don't like crime TV shows that much but who cares? I don't, that's for sure *hehe*

♥ Steph

[beccers4469]

I loved it:)

As always:D

Am I right in saying it is in Gibbs POV?

[sunshine_sean]

It was meant to be that way, yes. Still I wanted anyone who reads this to decide on their own.

Thanks for reviewing :)

[amanda_is_wacky]

That's a really nice little fic you have here. And I have to say, you do have Tony down really well here - he is always trying to cheer people up and he cares, but then we do get a glimpse every now and then that he's not quite as care free as the impression he likes to give people.

And now I have to start making my way backwards through your LJ to read all your posts :-D

[sunshine_sean]

Aw, that was nice of you. I have pretty much the same opinion about Tony. I'm sure there must be something behind the image that we are introduced to in the show. I think it's kinda sad that we don't get to know more about the man behind this mask. The producers showed a lot of his other side in the fourth season but he seems to retreat into old patterns now in season five. It's understandable, but still...

Anyway. You want to read all the silly stuff I posted up to now? Let yourself be warned that there's a lot of crap in between. *laughs* Let's just say that I'm not proud of everything.