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sunshine_sean

NCIS - fanfiction: Broken

Jan 19, 2008 20:57

Author: Steph
Fandom: NCIS
Genre: Angst, Drama
Rating: T
Spoilers: Hints for Hiatus, but nothing serious.
Warnings: Mention of Child Abuse, Suicide
Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo

Author's Note: Just another shortcut that came to mind while listening to the song "Same Mistake" by James Blunt. Couldn't do anything but ( Read more... )

writing, fic, gibbs/dinozzo, ncis

Comments 17

xdawnfirex January 19 2008, 20:26:17 UTC

*winces* Ouch!

sunshine_sean January 19 2008, 20:53:20 UTC

Thanks for reviewing :)

dischargie January 19 2008, 20:44:58 UTC

*sniff* How can you write a story with the death of my sweetheart`??? But it was so nice to read sunshine, very good...again *hihi*

Huggs
Claudi

sunshine_sean January 19 2008, 20:53:01 UTC

Thanks :) And it's just fiction, you know? ;)

*re-hugs*
Sunshine

dischargie January 19 2008, 21:05:42 UTC

Of course I know it's just fiction ... and I love it also to write his death^^

puppytraining January 19 2008, 20:57:18 UTC

This was so beautifully written. Poor Tony. *sniff* Tis a tough subject, but it was well written, and not melodramatic. Nice work :D

sunshine_sean January 20 2008, 15:28:01 UTC

I know, suicide is a serious topic and it hits quite close to home for me. Several years ago a boy in my school commited suicide. He was four years older, but I've been pretty close to him and it still hurts thinking about him. I'm over it, though. Just isn't that kind of thing I want to think about very often. ;)

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sunshine_sean January 20 2008, 15:30:24 UTC

I'll try working something out. It'll take a while since I'm in the middle of pre-exams, but after that I have quite some time :)

Thanks for reviewing.

anonymous January 19 2008, 23:56:23 UTC

Oh!

This was such a hard-hitting fic. A tough story to tackle, a depressing and upsetting subject, yet you wrote it in a believable way. I never felt that Tony was being melodramatic about it. It really just felt like the final straw and that he really couldn't see any way to go on living his broken life. I'd really love to be angry at Gibbs for letting Tony down, but it's true enough that he has a whole boat load (no pun intended) of issues of his own to deal with and really, how do you fix someone when you need fixing yourself?

Laura.

sunshine_sean January 20 2008, 15:34:52 UTC

I love the way you analyze my stories one after another. It makes me smile inside, when I read what other people think about what I wrote and try to take a look between the lines. And you really got the point of this one-shot, so I'm happy to see you took the time to review.

You're great, thanks :)