Original Story: Fractures

[sunshine_sean]

Fractures

„You need to talk about it.“

“About what?”

“How you feel.”

“I don’t know how to feel. Never have.”

You know there’s something you missed on your way to where you are now. You are empty, hollow inside. Lack of motivation maybe or it could be the not caring. You don’t know exactly. You don’t want to know.

You just want to forget

Comments

[joeybug]

This reminds me so much of myself that it's like you crawled inside my brain and lived as me for a few moments...it's beautiful, well constructed and just...wow...

On another note, are you ever going to give me feedback on Catch me when I fall?

[sunshine_sean]

Thank you so much for the review. I can't believe someone actually read this. I always thought it was crappy and in no way worth reading...

Anyway, thanks. And I'm sorry you feel/felt that way. I know what it's like, but really wished I wouldn't.

Concerning the feedback, look up your inbox in a few minutes. *blushes*

[citymusings]

I like it. It's very emotionally moving.

[sunshine_sean]

Thank you so much (: