[FIC] Sweet Love Betrayal

[sunshinelovers]

Title: Sweet Love Betrayal
Pairings: YunJae, and slight MinHo
Length: around 2000 words
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Fluff? Crack? SMUT!
Disclaimer: I really want to own them; heres the deal: I'll take Jae and give the rest back? Would that be alright? haha!
Author's Note: Due to everyones' request I decided to write something that carried on from

Comments

[moon1084]

i love my yunjae but poor min. ho shud break it off so min can find his own lover. yunjae belong only with each other

[sunshinelovers]

Yunjae always!

[sunshinelovers]

haha yea...Changmin saw =(

so bad....!

[chai_tea88]

i like my fair share of yunjae.....but i am not enjoying this yunjae at all.

i really dislike the yunho and jaejoong in this story. i am supposedly to root for them, but under such deceitful circumstances i am rooting for changmin instead.

yunho treats jaejoong better than his own boyfriend and instead scolds his own lover for doing, well, normal couple things. there is just something wrong with this picture. at this point, changmin is still his boyfriend, doesn't yunho at least remembers why he loved min? he did not seem to have an ounce of guilt about him, i really really can't stand yunho in this story. cheating is just evil. period.

i was hoping you will write a fic that presents a sympathetic view of all three. but right now, the only person who deserves any sympathy at all is changmin. the other two deserves nothing at all, really.

:(

[sunshinelovers]

haha...I'm so sorry, you didn't enjoy it =(

Yunho does treat Jae better cuz hes inlove with him and he fell outta love w/ Changmin, but I totally agree that Yunho shouldn't do that, the more I was writing the more I didn't like Yunho..LOL...and I really do like Yunho!

i'll figure something out, so you'll like it more =)

[kami_no_kami]

oh goodness, you DEFINITELY have to continue this..

[ps: you are my competitor for the Yunjae_ftw flash fic contest! GOOD LUCK! *glares*]

^^; i hope you write a 2nd shot~

[sunshinelovers]

haha! dont worry! I dont write as well as you!

but yea, i kinda entered this for the yunjae_ftw, just for the heck of it, but I don't think I'll enter the 2nd part ^^

[kami_no_kami]

too bad. would've been nice... >3<

i shall look forward to your 2nd part! :D

[sunshinelovers]

haha, thank you!

[nericia]

wow interesting ;) Feel sorry for Minnie, you know they don't have right doing this to him but..Jaeho have to be together :)
Thanks for sharing, hope you continue ;)

[sunshinelovers]

i agree! Jaeho, has to be together!