[FIC] The Unforgettable Night

[sunshinelovers]

Title: The Unforgettable Night
Pairings: YunJae, Jae? and slight MinHo
Length: around 3000 words
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Fluff? Crack? SMUT!
Disclaimer: I really want to own them; heres the deal: I'll take Jae and give the rest back? Would that be alright? haha!
Author's Note: Due to everyones' request again I decided to write the last part

Comments

[moon1084]

i want jae revenge dammit! JAE REVENGE! yunjae should get at evil min. i honestly wish i had read the pairing. i feel grossed out

[moon1084]

no offense writing is great as always

[sunshinelovers]

lol! sorry =(

I'm currently writing a YunJae fic, please look foward to that....

didn't mean to gross you out!

[moon1084]

honestly not your fault. i didn't see the pairing thing, i just saw your icon and didn't expect to see jae/min nastiness with a yunjae icon. hopefully next is just yunjae

[chai_tea88]

changmin was the one who was betrayed by the yunjae, yet here he was, portrayed as the evil one and probably being hated by all yunjae lovers.

sigh....

i give up.

(the jaemin smut was srsly hot though. min took his revenge, and rightly so.)

[sunshinelovers]

sorry, i had to make you give up! ='(

[chai_tea88]

i only gave up on the cheating couple in your story. jusy wished the victim wouldnt end up being the villain instead, though.

and though i know you are mainly a yunjae writer, i think you should write more jaemin smut. i like yunjae, but i dont think jaemin is nasty at all. i actually like both pairings. the smut was the most enjoyable part of the chapter for me. (not that it was smut, but because min was taking his revenge on his friends who betrayed him)

i am so evil to yunho, yet i love him best. >:/

[moon1084]

but i dont think jaemin is nasty at all

dont get me wrong i meant as in the rape part. he did rape jae right. thats why i saw him as evil.

[roughmetal2]

ah, i like changmin's revenge. i'm so pissed off at yunho and jae bcoz i hate traitors. maybe, what changmin did wasn't ethical (he virtually raped jae) but the two had to be taught a lesson. i think this calls for another sequel. since jae enjoyed his night with minnie, perhaps another encounter could happen? XD.

[sunshinelovers]

well, i'm glad someone likes min's revenge!

yea, yunho and jae were at the wrong to begin with -nods-

i hope yunho now learns XD

[sunshinelovers]

why? cuz i think, he thought this was the best way to do things.

is to get revenge =(

[zerotrigeal]

aw.. seriously leaving it like this? @__@
a potential to have a next installment I guess.. and I hope you do.. lol

note : never piss changmin off!

THAT'S SO DAMN RIGHT!!!! XD

[sunshinelovers]

haha! yup, Yunho shoulda been smart enough to NEVER EVER piss Changmin off!