Comments | sunspot67: Saiyuki story: A New Fantastic Point of View 3/3 (TwinFic based on indelicate ink's drawing)

sunspot67

Saiyuki story: A New Fantastic Point of View 3/3 (TwinFic based on indelicate ink's drawing)

Mar 20, 2011 15:25

Project number 146.2 was a little slate patio by the back door, with a light green metal glider on it that had been a bitch and a half to put together. Jeep was out there, napping in a patch of sun. He snaked his head up at them as they trooped out, balancing babies and bottles, and gave a little sigh, then uncurled himself and flapped up onto ( Read more... )

twinfic, slash, saiyuki, series, hakkai/gojyo

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indelicateink March 20 2011, 19:56:30 UTC

Yay! :D I love reading more of this. omg, it is so terribly sweet. (And HOT!)

I love all the thoughtful details and background; it was interesting to see how politics came into play. "The system has been activated" was great.

Thank you for writing and sharing more!

sunspot67 March 20 2011, 20:10:40 UTC

Thank you! And thank you again for your drawing--this is all your fault, you know!

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sunspot67 March 20 2011, 20:21:27 UTC

Thank you so much!

lawless523 March 20 2011, 20:51:57 UTC

Thank you for the wonderful story. I didn't realize there were going to be more stories from this 'verse.

sunspot67 March 20 2011, 20:56:49 UTC

Thank you! Well, it was a long gap (seems I posted Don't You Dare Close Your Eyes back in November!) but it did feel like I needed to get Hakkai and Gojyo a little more resolution. Sex and paperwork.

Am actually toying with the idea of a toddler!fic sequel, to be called "No One to Tell Us No." I blame my sons.

blown_wish March 20 2011, 22:24:57 UTC

It's the slice of life parts that underscore how awesome this is. All the people they meet and how Gojyo knew prior who's eyes narrowed in the sun and all that. Wow. It's beautiful work.

sunspot67 March 20 2011, 22:57:25 UTC

Thank you! So much!

blown_wish March 20 2011, 23:19:20 UTC

Thank you for sharing this. Amazing.

akiras_shadow March 21 2011, 02:21:41 UTC

Simply wonderful. Thank you for sharing. I always get so drawn in by your writing that I forget that I'm reading. When the story stops there is always a moment of blinking while I adjust and the pictures fade. Though that last scene with a pointy eared vine adorned Hakkai (with baby) walking next to Gojyo (also with baby) and followed by a low flying Jeep, is going to stick with me for awhile. *happy sigh*

sunspot67 March 21 2011, 22:12:34 UTC

Thank you so much. I can't think of higher praise for a writer. I'm moved that this story took you into another world. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.