Poem: An Observation

Mar 09, 2009 01:16

Hey, I was on the verge of having a panic attack and thought my heart was going to explode inside its ribcage so I wrote this:

An Observation

She struts the streets at 4am
When the world is quiet, fallen,
Clean sound of sound
She hits the ground hard
Shoes unforgiving against the concrete
She looks out for predators but the land lies
Just right
And knows ( Read more... )

anxiety, poetry. original writing

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radiantbaby March 10 2009, 07:36:21 UTC
Very moving and evocative. Well done.

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supasass March 10 2009, 16:59:54 UTC
Thanks sweetheart. :) How have you been feeling lately? (you can message me if you'd like?) xx

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