shower scene

[super_nick]

so my brother worte this ....

i found it on a disc when i was looking fo rmy resume and was like damn.

i read it before, but i dunno, it seemed new this time.

the words seemed to be more alive than the last so hed kill me if he knew i posted this,

but i know you guys will apreciate it ( some of you? )

if u dont know his name is ben

hes 19

Comments

[shrimpdick]

your brothers a really amazing/talented writer.
all I have to say is the moment was captured and I could see it all playing out in my mind.

<3's

[rhinoface]

wow, that was really awesome. but in the real meaning of that word, not in how most people use it.
i already told you but i thought i would post too.
you are both Really talented, but i guess that was just long enough to really get me thinking.
i liked the part about the glasses because the distorted view of reality is where my obsession for oversized glasses come from.
and its weird to think what you can get out of a few minutes in someones life
but the bathroom is a sanctuary
defintly see where this is comming from im just clumsy with words.
sorry again i have made an entire post in a comment
<3Rhinos

[_______overdose]

that was really powerful and truly amazing. if your brother really wrote it, god i hope he makes more like those, and i hope that you stumble upon them again. but he really needs to persue a career in writing. i want that on paper, bound in hard cover so that i can keep it forever.

the art of writing must run through your family's veins. bravo.