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Fanfiction: I See Red - 06

Aug 08, 2009 15:13

Title: I See Red
Rating: PG-13 for language
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - Yippee!! A new post. I am starting to really love writing this story. Does that make me full of myself? Um...anyway, I LOVE hearing from everyone, and I strongly encourage more responses. Like many before me, I'm a comment whore. I'm going to try and ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

Comments 26

jeepy91 August 9 2009, 02:31:16 UTC

Heh, we were JUST talking about this over on the PepSi International board, how they're ALWAYS getting interrupted. Wow, so much for finding peace in the afterlife, looks like Silvia didn't luck out in that respect!

You continue to have the perfect balance. The deepness of the soul melding passages, but you keep it light with the constant teasing and flirtation that make the pairing work so well. As always, nicely done :)

supercontenta August 9 2009, 08:21:28 UTC

Yes, they are doomed to NEVER be alone for more than five minutes, I swear.

Thank you. Your comments are very appreciated. I try to keep that balance, so I'm glad you like it. I'm glad it's working.

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supercontenta August 9 2009, 08:22:24 UTC

YAY! for brilliance. BOO! for cage.

But I guess the cage works so...*walks into cage, head hanging low* can I have some food at least?

zivaontour August 9 2009, 04:22:22 UTC

So I just got off a 13 hour work day, and I have to work another one tomorrow, and I'm all stressed and tense.

And then I check the community and this is the first thing I see and I read it and it's F-ING FANTASTIC, and so well thought out, and BEAUTIFUL, and it makes my heart smile (and my lips, too) and all the stress melts away.

So now I'm going to bed happy - and it's all because of you!

Thank you!

supercontenta August 9 2009, 08:23:28 UTC

Wow. I feel you. I had several 12 hour days this week and it can make one ragged. Your comment touched me. I am so very glad I could melt that stress away. I hope to do it again soon. Thanks for posting this. It makes me want to write more!

raven_bard August 9 2009, 09:09:28 UTC

*facepalm* They are doomed, DOOMED to be interrupted for all eternity I tell you. *shakes head* It's curse...like one of those revolving circles of death..they can't escape it. Pooooey!!! But I looooove this chapter...I love all your chapters...I'm practically oozing love outta my pores. *pause* Wait that did NOT sound hot. Ooops. Oh well....urm...I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!! The whole merging together and the electricity...YUM!!!!

supercontenta August 9 2009, 23:49:43 UTC

Yeah! You're back! I missed your comments! I'm so glad you loved this chapter. I will do my best to break the curse!

vickiheartpepsi August 9 2009, 12:47:59 UTC

ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!
omg how can u come up with all this

MASTERPIECE!
CLASSIC!

love it love it love it:):):)
keep it up!!!!
*cyber hug*:D

supercontenta August 9 2009, 23:50:25 UTC

awwww, schucks...*blushes*