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Fanfiction: I See Red - 08

Aug 13, 2009 13:55

Title: I See Red
Rating: R - strong language and some violence
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - What's up, chicas?! I don't really know what to say except the usual: COMMENTS PLEASE!! Whether you like it, hate it, despise it, or just think it is boring as hell - I want to know. Again, I'm a comment whore. What can I say? I'm ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

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extessie August 13 2009, 22:17:18 UTC

My expression: =0
The only sound I can make right now : *gasp*

That should tell you enough.
If it doesn't, here are some words: Oh. My. God. This is AMAZIN!G I absolutely LOVE this, and Pepa going all bad-ass on that fucking idiot. Hope you continue soon..I wanna know what Pepa is going to do to Antonio.

Take care!

supercontenta August 14 2009, 07:55:35 UTC

Love the face: =0

Pepa wanted to kill that idiot so bad, I had to hold my fingers back from writing it!! I already started on the next part. Let's see if I can keep bad-ass Pepa at bay. Thanks!

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supercontenta August 14 2009, 07:56:35 UTC

Yeah, DL and Pepa can be some scary shit.

And that line you mentioned, my girlfriend said it made her choke up too. Thanks for mentioning it.

musicbuttons August 13 2009, 22:47:32 UTC

I agree with extessie..oh.My.God. This is Amazing!!

I cracked up with the "Hey flower boy, how's it going?"

supercontenta August 14 2009, 07:57:20 UTC

Thanks musicbuttons! Flower boy...hehe, what a loser...

girlechick August 13 2009, 22:56:07 UTC

i love it when pepa's a mother-fuckin' insane cop!
love it keep up the good work!

supercontenta August 14 2009, 07:57:48 UTC

Thanks! Isn't she just awesome when she's kicking ass?

lenageek August 13 2009, 23:11:46 UTC

Good frakking Lord, where have I been, not catching up on this story until now?! (Watching too much pepsienglish, that's where!) Loved seeing Pepa go insane cop in this part since it really works for her here! I can totally visualize her taunting Pinocchio - great nickname!

This chapter was a perfect combination of sweet when Silvia cried with DL and insanely awesome with the informant twist. Yo go Pepa and kick some El Gordo ass! [pumps fist]

P.S. Oh, and supercontenta (I've always loved your username btw) since you are a self-described 'comment whore', I'll go back and comment on all the other parts, even in retrospect to make up for the fact that I didn't start reading this fantabulous story until last night. :D

supercontenta August 14 2009, 08:02:14 UTC

lanageek! How dare you watch pepsienglish when you should be reading my story? *turns pepsienglish clips off and hides screen* Um...yeah, I do the same thing. I've watched the clips over and over and over, and probably will for the rest of my life to be honest. No couple beats Pepsi, I tell ya.

Your comment was awesome, btw, and thanks for loving my name. It was an easy one to choose since I don't speak spanish, yet I was able to understand Pepa when she said she was "super contenta." I thought it was so cute.

And are you really going to comment on all the parts of this story? Cause that is super awesome! Gracias!!

lenageek August 16 2009, 07:16:28 UTC

How dare you watch pepsienglish when you should be reading my story? *turns pepsienglish clips off and hides screen*

I can't help it - it's addictive, as you well know! [shrugs helplessly]

Yeah, I love the 'super contenta' line from Pepa, which of course leads to the cutest flipping the bird I've ever seen from Silvia. I don't speak a word of Spanish, but gawd, I want to learn now!