Fanfiction: I See Red - 10

[supercontenta]

Title: I See Red
Rating: R - strong language and some violence
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - Good news: I got a new laptop!!! Bad news: I'm sick *cough, cough*. So, in order to make me feel better, all I ask is for y'all to tell me what you think of this installment. The doctor says I need a healthy dose of comments. Oh, and

Comments

[xejanfan]

bleh, i'm having a wicked bad attack of the allergies myself, so i'll join you in some sniffles! *sniffle, sniffle* but once again, very good update! i'm glad silvia is there to talk some sense into pepa, ease her fears about losing silvia if they get justice on the killers.

ok, more please!

[supercontenta]

Oh no xejanfan! I hope you're feeling better. I am worse off than I was on Monday. And it's Thursday!!! So I have no energy to write, which is pissing me off. This is bullshit!!!

[junebuggy01]

Dammit Supes! Where the hell was the sexy time!? lol, jk! But this chapter had me tearing up, it was so emotional and I love it! I... I don't know how to say this... but I'm glad it was all talk and no sexy time. *gasp* Did I really just say that? Yeah... it's true. I loved the way you had Silvia reminding Pepa about who she is and at the end, the little banter! And the promise to come back to her? God I love this story.

BTW, I wouldn't mind sexy time... ;)

[supercontenta]

Wow. Just wow. If I'm not mistaken, you just said you were GLAD this was all talk and no sexy time. Either I'm dreaming *pinches self* or you really liked what they had to say.
I don't think there could be a higher compliment coming from you. Thanks ;)

And I was going to write sexy time, but I'm still sick. Too sick to write. Bullocks.

[junebuggy01]

Awww, I'm sorry hun. :( *Hands you Orange juice and hope it helps* Really hope you get better soon! And not just cuz I want more of this awesome fic, but also because I care too.

And I will give yo the hugest compliments I can think of because you deserve it!

[sia_9]

this is how good u write when u r sick? i m in trouble! feel better soon super. really, your story just gets better and better!

[supercontenta]

Well, I wrote most of it before I was sick. I just happened to post the day I got sick. Now I can't bring myself to write cause I feel worse!!

[raven_bard]

You're sick too? I think there's a bug circulating the PepSi forum cuz I'm so damn sick myself. To the point where my housemate has confined me to my bed. And I can only have liquids *whimpers* Liquids is NOT a food! Urgh....

Anyway I'm rambling. This new installment is awesome. I love how Pepa's just so scared of losing Silvia, to the point where she would give everything up just to have the redhead stay with her. But of course Silvia saves the day with that fantastic speech on how she loves Pepa as she is. These two are amazing together, whether they're fighting or making googly eyes at each other. Can't wait to read more.

Oh and I hope you feel better soon!

[supercontenta]

I need to be confined to a bed, but I keep going to work. (Which is making my wifey pissed off). I took Monday off. Now I don't want to take any other days off. I know, it makes no sense. I shouldn't feel guilty about being sick. It happens! But that's America for you. We feel guilty when we miss work. It is so frakkin' stupid!! Now I am totally rambling...

I'm glad you enjoyed the last chapter. Pepa's real fear wasn't so much her own anger and violence, but losing Silvia. I think I would be scared too. I don't want Silvia to go *sniff, sniff*

[booglebee]

This story really does just get better and better with each update!
My favourite line I must say is:
"Are you kidding me? The moment I'm able to touch you again, I'm ripping every piece of clothing from your body and devouring you."
hahaha.

I get excited when I see you've updated! :)

[supercontenta]

Yay!! I'm glad you liked that line. Because damn! That's what I want to happen the moment they touch each other too!! Thanks booglebee!!!