Fanfiction: I See Red - 13

[supercontenta]

Title: I See Red
Rating: R - for language
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - So, if you read this and decide to throw tomatoes at me, all I ask is that they are ripe. Rotten ones stink and are all squishy. They're no fun. Ripe ones, however, are quite tasty if I catch them in my mouth. I know this doesn't contain the sexy time you

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[dossemanas]

*throwing ripe tomatoes at myself* hehehe. well, i will be the only one that is pleased that there was no shower sex. but, i AM pleased. yay! because i am a glutton for punishment. and, you know, i love this shit to be dragged out as long as possible. restraint and release! i love this story and love the drama. and i feel so bad for rita. she can never catch a break. remember when she couldn't go undercover as a stripper because she can't do a cartwheel? poor woman. please give rita something to smile about eventually in this story.

ghost silvia. what can i say? i am desperately, madly, insanely in love with her.

[supercontenta]

Dosse, I'm AMAZED at how fast you read this!!! ;)

Perhaps I should have dedicated this entry to you, because I gave you everything you wanted: drama, angst, anger, kick-ass-ness, and best of all no ghost_shower_smut!! That's right people, blame her! *points at dossemanas and runs away*

Seriously though - ghost Silvia? What a charmer!! I'm also in love. Jealous?

[supercontenta]

Yay!! You aren't throwing tomatoes at me!! You liked Pepa's kick-ass-ness in this chapter! This makes my day. And being able to view Pepa's dreams sounds like a dream in and of itself! Especially if they're naughty ;).

That line you mentioned also cracked me up. Pepa is so freakin' feisty! I love her!!

[lenageek]

How about half ripe tomatoes? Heh heh. No shower sex, but a hell of an update!! (Not that I don't squee and do an dance of joy every time I see you've updated anyway!) Wow, Mariano getting hit was sure unexpected, yet it keeps the danger of El Gordo so close and present - heck, my mind was still on shower time, sorry!

I can't wait until the super sexy team of Pepa and Ghost Silvia clean the floor with El Gordo - and am I the only one who thinks Pepa would look sexy in a janitor's jumpsuit thingy? Cuz she would! (Okay, blame that on my Laura crush, cuz she can wear a paper bag and it would look good!)

[supercontenta]

Half ripe tomatoes? Hmmmm. I think I'll pass, unless they ripen with age. In which case, toss 'em my way. I'll throw 'em in a salad later.

I would love to hear you squee and do your dance of joy. I wonder what it looks like. Do you wear feathers? Yeah, Mariano should have checked himself before he wrecked himself. Ouch, that wasn't very nice was it? But poor Paco feeling responsible? He's such a sweetheart.

And sexy time will come. It's just hard at the moment with danger around every corner, and El Gordo breathing down their necks. That mofo needs to go down!! And the super sexy PepSi duo are the ones for the job.

Laura in a jumpsuit? I can see that. And no, you aren't the only one who thinks it could be hot.

BTW, who is pictured in your icon?

[lenageek]

LOL, my dance of joy doesn't involve anything with feathers, just a lot of wriggling in my chair at my desk!

Yes, please put Pepa in a jumpsuit in the next chapter as she's undercover - maybe she can wear a cape under it so she can whip it out as she busts some ass? ;D

BTW, who is pictured in your icon?

Ah, one of my newer, most favorite, squeeable, dance of joy icons, courtesy of intodelirium - those are Laura's eyes.

[lenageek]

Oh, and P.S. - I LOVE your notarized promise of a happy ending! Happy endings are my favs, I don't care how sappy anyone thinks I am!

[supercontenta]

Yes! Promised from the bottom of my heart *crosses heart*

PS: I LOVE your icon. That is, for me, THE sexiest look Pepa has ever given Silvia. In fact, the sexiest look EVER. Period. Nuff said.

[lenageek]

Yay for happy ending promises! And for super sexy Pepa looks, especially with the bangs hanging over her eyes! [faints] If I were Silvia, I wouldn't have been staring at her, confused about the missed date, I would have torn her clothes off! Of course, Pepa did refer later in the show to the fact that they'd done it in the freight elevator, so I guess that did happen - off screen, dammit!

[supercontenta]

Ok, we are of the same mind. Whenever I watch this scene the exact same thing goes through my head. "Silvia? What is wrong with you?? This woman is the hottest thing on planet earth and she WANTS YOU!!!!" I mean, wtf?? I wouldn't be wondering about what to say. I wouldn't be worried about the date I missed. I wouldn't be able to think - period! With her looking at me like that?!!! Her clothes would be on the floor and the emergency stop button would be pressed and torn out of the wall. She wouldn't know what hit her.

[pepsiaddict37]

Nice to see a new chapter. I love it as usual.
I to love ghost silvia, although at this point i'd take her back as anything. my poor little heart cant accept she is gone, so i'm glad these stories will live on through this community. pepsi has to live on through us all.
keep it up. i am loving your story.

[supercontenta]

Oh, don't let your poor little fangirl heart hurt too much. It will all be better soon. Just pretend this story is the show, and all will be well in the end. K?

Thanks for commenting!!