Fanfiction: I See Red - 17

Oct 11, 2009 22:34

Title: I See Red
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - Drumroll, please...

"Pepa? Pepa...?" I'm jostled awake by my big brother. Tendrils of drool have oozed down my chin during my sojourn into unconsciousness. Slightly embarrassed, I wipe at it and quickly absorb my surroundings. Low lights. Desks and chairs. I'm sitting ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

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raven_bard October 12 2009, 08:52:17 UTC
Fuck me dead! *pants* You know what? I'm so glad in my break between classes I went and bought some new underwear. *sly grin*

Hell, woman that shower_smut was goddamn freakin AMAZING! At first I was kinda like...dude, Pepa's doing a ghost. But that thought derailed..along with what was left of my brain cells at the way you wrote them having SHOWER_SMUT!!! *fans self* Kudos, Supes. Coming back from uni to this was worth it...and worth reading even though I'm procrastinating on my next assignment. Not that I could have resisted...I saw the NC-17 and I nearly broke my finger clicking on the link. *grins*

Brilliant as always. Silvia sleeping at the end was a bonus. So ghosts do sleep. Interesting! Can't wait for the next update.

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supercontenta October 12 2009, 17:12:35 UTC
LMAO.

As usual, your comment is awesomeness personified. I hope your finger is ok. *snickers* I'm happy to have spurred you to try on your new underwear sooner rather than later.

Here *gives you cool drink* does this help out? I don't want to be responsible for you skipping your next assignment due to overheating. You better cool off ;)

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junebuggy01 October 12 2009, 09:10:58 UTC
Holy toledo Supes! That was... that was... And then you... ummm... I... okay... so like... and then...and I was like GHOST_SHOWER_SMUT!!!... and then... my brain is... That was good. Who the fuck am I kidding that was FABULOUS!! The whole thing was just fabulous. *Nods* I have... have to go fix my brain...

*5 minutes later*

I do have one critique though... Where the hell is the trash can?! There was no mention! LOL!

Love it Supercontenta, can't wait for the next part!

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supercontenta October 12 2009, 17:15:47 UTC
GHOST_SHOWER_SMUT!!! Did you ever think it would see the light of day? Even I had my doubts at times. But here it is. It happened. Finally. And I'm glad you loved it as much as you did. I would have been sad if didn't leave you speechless.

And what are you talking about, no trash can? She threw her jumpsuit in the trash can, didn't she?? That was just for you!!!

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junebuggy01 October 12 2009, 18:18:49 UTC
I did think it would see the light of day... It just took FOREVER! Lol, I'm just kidding. I would have given you a standing ovation, but it was way too early in the morning when I read it and my brain parts were dead and there were people around me and it would have looked funny.

About the trash can... You called it waste basket. You can't expect me to know it's same thing. Especially with my brain broken and all. *Nods*

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supercontenta October 12 2009, 21:08:02 UTC
I should have known you wouldn't get it. With all the smut going on, who would be paying attention to a small detail like that?? How is your brain now? Better?

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lenageek October 12 2009, 09:57:42 UTC
Ooooohhhh, GOOD FUCKING LORD, I AM A PUDDLE OF GOO RIGHT NOW! I just melted with the sheer, sweet hotness of it all!! Fuck me, that was worth waiting for Supes!

The fact that ghosts need sleep after having their brains fucked out by their wife - now that is original as it is endearing!

Whew! More ghost smut, pleeeaassseee!

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supercontenta October 12 2009, 17:18:08 UTC
Yes!! I made you melt into goo !!! There's no higher compliment than that! In all caps no less!! Fuck Yay!!

I'm soooo happy you think it was worth the wait. I know I disappointed people before, and I wanted this time round to make it up to y'all.

MORE ghost smut, you say? I have to admit, I was thinking about it...

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qosmio18 October 12 2009, 12:53:42 UTC
Ahhwooogah! Eyes popping outta socket and tongue panting like a hungry dog.

Wow. To be able to knock a ghost out after sex, I must bow to the master. Lol. Awesome. Ok so I'm going off to breathe and shower. ;p

Can't wait for next chap.

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supercontenta October 12 2009, 17:19:49 UTC
My favorite thing in this comment is "Ahhwooogah!"

That Pepa has some mad skillz in the shower, you got that right....

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qosmio18 October 12 2009, 20:52:18 UTC
What can I say Super, your smut fics bring out the animated perv in me. ;p

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supercontenta October 12 2009, 18:08:53 UTC
*Hugs you back*

I'm thrilled that you liked it!!!

And I think y'all can deal with giving ghost Silvia up to Pepa if it means we all get to enjoy this kind of entertainment. Don't you?

So, should I call you muchosupercontenta??

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