Fanfiction: I See Red - 18

[supercontenta]

Title: I See Red
Rating: R (for swearing and sexual content)
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - I know I've been MIA. I have barely commented on other people's fics! *face palm* I'm so sorry, my friends. RL called. And my muse fell asleep. This chapter is total filler, and just in case you forgot what the hell was going on: The

Comments

[lenageek]

Oh my freaking god supes, if that's what you call filler, then slap me upside the head and call me stupid! That was wonderful, hot, playful, sexy time! Mmmm!! Silvia worrying about whether she can measure up to expectations when she's in the real world again and Pepa's speech to her just made me melt! And the drool ball that is Pepa - LMAO!! Priceless!

And where does the evidence lead? And Pepa and Silvia sound so confident that Silvia will come back - will she?! How? I'm dying here!

Yep, making Silvia Castro smile is what I was meant to do on this Earth. I'm sure of it.

Aww! This line was so incrediby sweet and made of pure WIN!!

[supercontenta]

I am so tempted to slap you upside your head and call you stupid. But I won't. It would be rude. And I adore you lenageek! I wouldn't do that...nooooo. Never.

I'm happy you liked my non-filler chapter. Or whatever it was. How bout we call it my sweetness chapter? Or bickering leads to sexytime chapter? Those work.

[lenageek]

That's okay, you can give me a love tap any time you want, supes! And I adore you too - it's a mutual lovefest in this community! ;D

Hell yeah, sexytime chapter! hee hee!

And I always reserve the elevator icon for you too...<3

[supercontenta]

Yay!! my own person icon of loooove. Damn, I'm looking at it now. It is doing funny things to my libido...

Now, if I were to give you a "love tap", it would not be on your head...

[musicbuttons]

Great update - it was well worth the wait!

You really bring Pepa and Silvia together in such a way that it reminds me why I started to watch this little Spain television show off of youtube.

My favorite line...."I'm only at my best when I'm with you."

:o)

[supercontenta]

Thanks music! Awwww, you're so sweet. I'm glad my writing makes you think of the good ole days of watching this sweet couple on the YouTube. I miss those days when every week brought another adorable scene. I suppose now I'll just have to write them!

[lovelyafterglow]

Can we please go back in time and make you a writer for LHDP??

Another bang-up job, supes. I don't think I could possibly love this story any more than I already do...and then you post a new chapter and I'm proven wrong!

[supercontenta]

Do you have a time machine? Cause I'll hop in it and do my best to become a LHDP writer. Unfortunately, I don't speak spanish. Do you think that'd be a problem? *waves hand* Nahhhh. They can get a translator.

Lovley, you comment melted my heart. I'm glad your enjoyment of this story grows with each chapter. I couldn't ask for a better compliment. Thanks!

PS: I LOVE you story...any chance of an update soon?

[lovelyafterglow]

Yes, I just so happen to own a time machine. I'll have to dig it out of storage... :-P

I'm at complete halt on my story. Since I've never written before, this whole "writer's block" business is new to me and extremely frustrating. Every time I try to brainstorm some ideas, my brain just goes BLANK.

.........

Just like that. I'm really hoping to have something down by this weekend, though. *crossing fingers*

[supercontenta]

I'm sorry about writer's block. It can be a real bitch. My suggestion is to seduce your muse. Coax her back out with some hot chocolate and a promise of sexytimes. I think that should work, I know it does for me! *nods* Yes, yes.

Seriously though, I hope you beat that block and keep at it. I love your story. It enchants me!

[silviaslabcoat]

Yes you back super dupa oh I have missed you and your talent honey!!

Thanks for this amazing update it was great. I loved the teasing and the sweetness between these 2.

Please don't go away that long again super dupa we all missed you!!

[supercontenta]

*cue supa dupa fly music*

"Helllll yeah baby. I'm back. And I've got what chu want..."

I'll try not to go away for so long next time. Thanks for the love.

[elisa_trapt]

So, um,...super, you can write filler any freakin' time you want. Holy..... One of my favorite lines? "No, ghosts DO sleep, remember? They just need to be fucked into oblivion first." Well, then, mission accomplished there, Agent Miranda!

Also, I am once again staking my claim on Ghost Silvia. To hell with it, I'm throwing caution to the wind - I love her! She's the best ghost EVER! (I don't know too many, mind you, but of this I'm quite sure.)

Though you've certainly got me curious, super, about just how long she's going to stay in this ethereal form. What have you got up your sleeve? B/c Silvia certainly doesn't seem to think she's going to stay this way forever - "I just worry that when I come back..." What, exactly, does that mean? Hmmm?? I know, I know, I'm going to have to wait patiently with all the others. *sigh* I'll try. :)

[supercontenta]

"Well, then, mission accomplished there, Agent Miranda!"

Indeed!!

Well, considering your utter devotion, and quick response, I think you may have a leg up on winning our gorgeous specter of a crime fighter away from all others!

And as for the future of our spirited heroine? She's always been certain she'd come back. Can we trust her instincts? You'll just have to wait and see...