Fanfiction: I See Red - 19

Nov 12, 2009 15:38

Title: I See Red
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - I don't know how I feel about this chapter. It's more filler. But that's ok, right? At least I'm moving the story forward. Let me know what you think. I would be most appreciative. I hope to get my story finished before the start of next season. And I also wanted to ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

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supercontenta November 13 2009, 20:52:22 UTC
Aww, schucks zoonz. I couldn't ask for a better comment. You really know how to feed the monster.
I'll never doubt my filler again!

And, yes, Pepa has excellent gaydar. However, the odds are in her favor. I'm sure EVERYONE she meets is attracted to her, so as far as she's concerned every woman she meets is potentially gay. Wouldn't you say?

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lenageek November 13 2009, 01:30:47 UTC
Whoo hoo! Another winner of a chapter, supes! Your 'filler' chapters are so good, they kick my ass into submission at anything I could do! ;D Yes, I'm still around, but my muse is being a stubborn bitch, so I'm trying to kick it into gear.

The sixth sense Pepa - love it! Through her grief, she becomes adept at seeing through walls! Ohh, and that new forensics women - are they all gay in Spain? :D Hey, if that's the case, throw one my way! So funny how Silvia is determined to make sure that Pepa's all business with her! And where will this new lead go? Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve!

Thanks again for another great chapter! Later!

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supercontenta November 13 2009, 20:54:35 UTC
Oh, stop it lena! My fic does not kick your fic's ass in any way! Yours is great!

*tosses sexy Spanish lesbian your way*

Here you go! A special lady just for you. She speaks Spanish to boot! Ask her to roll her "R"s for you - you'll pass out from the power of swoon!!

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lenageek November 13 2009, 23:11:06 UTC
Ooh, a sexy Spanish lezzie! Thanks supes! Ooh, the rolling "R"s! It's too much to take! [swoons and passes out on the floor]

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elisa_trapt November 13 2009, 02:36:37 UTC
My dear super, you never fail to make me fall a little more in love with each chapter. With whom, you ask? I'll let you figure that one out...*wink*

It cracked me right up that Silvia's brilliant plan of explanation was Pepa's miraculous sixth sense. I'll chalk that one up to the fact that the quest for supernovas at the hotel left her brain addled. And I laughed right out loud at "Fan-fucking-tastic." Jealous Ghost Silvia?! Love it!!

While we're on the subject, there's something about Pepa that makes men, women, and small animals lose their minds. She walks into a room, and bam! I'm willing to bet that that forensics inspector wasn't even interested in women until Pepa walked into the lab! LOL. And that's what'll make Silvia see red (oh, I kill myself) - she KNOWS the "Pepa Effect" all too well! That inspector better keep her hands to herself - there's no telling what an angry ghost might do if someone's making a pass at her wife....

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elisa_trapt November 13 2009, 02:59:58 UTC
Listen, you, shouldn't you be sitting at your computer WRITING?! And not paying any attention to who I may or may not be in love with? B/c I'm fairly certain that one of the fic writers poor super is crying about is YOU. Ah, the beauty of it all - I don't even have to harrass you! Someone's doing it for me! Look, I'm just sitting here quietly! (And you're so totally on for the arm wrestling....)

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silviaslabcoat November 13 2009, 03:25:10 UTC
Super dupa is back in the house!!! Yay I have missed you hun and agree with you where have all the writers gotten too?

I loved the update and a new hot forensic inspector who has the hots for Pepa lol this is going to be interesting!!

Keep writing super honey as we can't lose another great writer on this site!!

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supercontenta November 13 2009, 21:02:47 UTC
Woop! Woop! Supa Dupa is back in da house!!

I'm glad you liked my newest chapter. Now how are we going to drag those other writers back to the forum?

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av8rwinn November 13 2009, 03:30:46 UTC
I miss you. I miss you.

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supercontenta November 13 2009, 21:06:38 UTC
thanks av8r. I'm happy to be back.

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