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Pepsi Fanfiction 01 - "Fatherly Advice"

Jul 13, 2009 17:44

Title: Fatherly Advice
Rating: PG
Show: LHDP
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Do you watch LHDP? Yes? Then you won't be spoiled.
Time frame: Takes place between the episode 87 and 89. (After Silvia breaks the rules to do the autopsy, and before Pepa pretends to be pregnant)
Summary - DL finally talks to Silvia about her and Pepa's break-up.

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Comments 14

av8rwinn July 14 2009, 02:52:11 UTC

cute! I like it.

supercontenta July 14 2009, 04:36:17 UTC

Thanks!

lovelyafterglow July 14 2009, 04:24:44 UTC

Great story! I had been hoping for a scene between them, too!

I really like the way you wrote their interaction...it makes sense taking into consideration how Don Lorenzo really does seem to have come around on the show in regards to Pepa.

supercontenta July 14 2009, 04:47:53 UTC

Thank you so much!

I think DL can be so sweet, and I really like his change regarding Pepsi's relationship. So, I hope I did it justice.

junebuggy01 July 14 2009, 09:15:44 UTC

I loved this! It was extremely sweet and touching. I caught myself saying "awwww." And I never do that. Seriously, love it

supercontenta July 15 2009, 01:30:06 UTC

Thanks so much junebuggy! As you know, I'm an avid reader of yours. So it means a lot coming from you!

junebuggy01 July 15 2009, 16:20:04 UTC

I mean it too, I hope you write more! :D

dossemanas July 14 2009, 09:31:57 UTC

yes! this fic is like gold to me! it's so totally perfect - i felt like i was watching a scene directly from the show. you nailed the characters perfectly. and, as you know, i think this is a scene that was sorely lacking from LHDP. it felt like DL and Silvia never even spoke all of 7th season.

now this sweet little moment will forever be in my brain. it's canon to me now - hooray! thank you!

now go write us some more pepsi filler goodness...

supercontenta July 15 2009, 02:11:28 UTC

Thank you! I'll try to write more pepsi filler goodness just for you!

onemorefan July 15 2009, 01:07:34 UTC

You're so right!!!! I kept waiting for the show to have some scene in which DL would say something very similar to what you have just described and it never happened. But, finally, it has happened!!! That was a brilliant idea beautifully executed!!!! *smiling happily*
Thank you very much for your time and effort. As the one that pushed all of you into the in-between little challenge, I am really pleased that everyone has been very receptive and I am very happy each time any of you is so generous to share some time/work with us. And, not only any work, but a great piece too, perfectly intertwined with the story and with the characters.
Keep at it if you can, please. There are so many other small holes that we can fill up to write their story and I'm sure you will be able to write them as beautifully as this ;).....

supercontenta July 15 2009, 01:29:02 UTC

Thank you so much!! You are very kind. And thank YOU for the in-between fanfic challenge. I've really enjoyed reading all the filler pieces as well, and I loved writing this one. I hope to write some more.
As dossemanas was telling me the other day, there is a whole years worth of time unaccounted for during the Pepsi relationship. Who knows what happened? Let's fill some of those gaps!!

onemorefan July 15 2009, 03:44:16 UTC

Please do!!!! I'll be more than happy to know what happened during that time. The first season end, with the Kaiser's capture left me with a so sweet an image (the police van scene) and so many issues unexplored... I have many ideas but I'm unable to carry them out so... just let me know if you're running short on them...
PS: Just in case I was not clear enough: please, keep at it!!!