Fanfiction: Starting Off With A Bang

[supercontenta]

Title: Starting Off With A Bang
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Timeline: Our girls are married! No death/despair/carnage at their wedding! Hooray!!

A/N: I meant to get this done and posted by New Year's Eve, but no such luck. However, I feel I'm posting this close enough to still be relevant, yeah? Yes, this fic is my entry into junebuggy 's Smut Challenge

Comments

[elisa_trapt]

How did I miss this until now? That was smutastic, super! There's nothing like a little fun, mindless smut in the bathroom to start the new year. Plus, Pepa breaks some jerk's nose. Does it get any better?

Now, um, super...*clears throat* I'm really starting to miss a certain ethereal beauty. Soooooo...? *looks around hopefully*

[supercontenta]

I don't KNOW how you missed it! But I was starting to worry... I was wondering if this fic was too smutastic for you. But who was I kidding? You are just as much of a horndog as the rest of us, aren't you? Yeah, the jig is up, elisa. I knew it all along...

As for that other matter you mentioned...

I hope you aren't missing that ethereal beauty too much. There's no need to miss her, you know, because she is always with you. She wanted me to tell you that ;)

I need to start up on my next chapter very soon. I don't want to wait another month before posting. So I'll give it my all. I really will. But I have a feeling this entry may take a while to nail down. Just give me time. It's-a-comin'

[elisa_trapt]

Me? A horndog? Moi?!?! *looks over shoulder* Oh, you must be talking about that OTHER Elisa. I try to keep her on a very tight rein, but sometimes she escapes. And then she makes a beeline for the smut fics! *shakes head* One track mind. Shameful, really.

*Gasp* A message from my ghost?! Be still my heart! That will keep me nice and toasty warm for a while. But don't keep me waiting too long, super. 3rd party messages can only go so far before I need the real deal. I have faith in you to deliver.

[dossemanas]

have i commented on this yet? no? oh, yeah, that's because i've been sitting in glacial water for the past two days trying to cool off from this smutty-smut-smut.

that was ridonkulously good. masterfully crafted. i loved the dig at aitor and the pove props. and pepa defending her woman with her magnum and her hot blood... and dl kicking out that dickwad's teeth... and, and, and... and i will forever love you for putting the image of silvia in a backless dress in my mind. FOREVER.

[supercontenta]

I am impressed that you can use the phrases "smutty-smut-smut" and "masterfully crafted" in one comment. You'd think those two terms wouldn't be able to coexist in the same thought, but somehow it works! *nods* yes, the high-art of smut writing.

Thanks for mentioning the Aitor digs and the Pove props. Those moments just kind of happened, and I was enjoying that part immensely.

And one final thought:

SILVIA. BACKLESS. DRESS. !!!!!! Is there anything more wonderful than that??

[lovelyafterglow]

Silvia undressed?

[supercontenta]

Hmmmm.... you make an excellent point.

[selinakris]

This story is so good I can't stop re-reading it.
I think that like Pepa, I to would be getting Silvia mad at me all the time, if that was the result.. yessiree.

And as dossemanas said, Silvia in a backless dress, what an image..be still my heart.. and other areas *wicked laugh*

[supercontenta]

Hooray!! Multiple readings = me at my most supercontenta!!

I'm glad you're enjoying this story. It is now yours. It belongs to everyone, to enjoy for as long as you like!

May we all dream of Silvia in a backless dress...

[12avocados]

funny, sexy, and omg the dress, perfecto.

[supercontenta]

Yippeee!! I'm so glad you commented and liked it!! 12 avi's liked it! Yippeeee!!!

[sumatrabean]

Wow. I really liked this story and your description of Silvia in her dress - heart pounding. I'll probably read this a dozen more times. I'm worried that I'm turning into a perv. :)

[supercontenta]

HA! Join the club...