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Feb 11, 2010 15:17

Title: I See Red
Rating: R
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - I am wayyyyy behind on my fic reading. So if any of you authors out there have been thinking, "why hasn't supercontenta commented on my fic yet? Does she hate me?!" The answer is no. I don't hate you. I love you! I've just been busy writing this little chapter. So, rest ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

Comments 26

trickydaos February 15 2010, 15:52:51 UTC

Amazing! It's absolutely amazing!!!

The scene where Pepa is having face off with El Gordo was very powerful. I found myself holding my breath here and there, gosh...

Pepa's dilemma...ouch, thank god her guardian angel's words always reminds her so that she would not lose herself. Because I know if only Ghost-Silvia didn't come and knock some sense in her head earlier, Pepa will definitely gone off to the deep end, and she would never be able to turn back.

The last part was so beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes *sniff*. I was sad and happy at the same time, because, really, I just want Pepa to be reunited with her princess.

Thank you for this fic!

supercontenta March 5 2010, 20:21:28 UTC

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, but I wanted to say THANK YOU!! Everything you said was really sweet and I'm glad my story has touched you. That is everything I could hope for.

I also want Pepa to reunite with her princess. And the next chapter is coming along, but slow going. So please be patient. I hope you like it.

Take care,
supes

bluechicki February 16 2010, 10:34:42 UTC

Hi Supes, sorry it's taken me this long to comment *hangs head in shame*....It's taken me this long to think of the proper response to such a superb chapter...or as someone i know would say a SUPADUPA chapter!!!lol ( ... )