An Old Fragment

Jan 24, 2005 23:54

In the white room, there is a white cable and a white plug, and a white power socket. The only other colour is red. Blood leaks from the power socket's fistulas, down three inches of slick white wall, to pool on the floor. There's been a rupture in the bioelectric packeting behind the wall. A broken heart in the interstitial net of veins and ( Read more... )

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okkitten January 25 2005, 00:06:41 UTC
Shoot the fucker and put it out of it's misery. Poor little bastard.

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raving_rendal January 25 2005, 00:16:44 UTC
*picturing this..and liking it* how fast is this bleeding, might need a drink.

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chaya January 25 2005, 00:20:25 UTC
Intriguing.

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ilovescabs January 25 2005, 00:29:36 UTC
Maybe you need a doctor that makes....

wait for it...

house calls.

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porphyre January 25 2005, 00:40:55 UTC
but only because he beat us to it.

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ilovescabs January 25 2005, 02:03:20 UTC
Are there any other kind of puns?

After all, two-thirds of "pun" is P.U.

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emperor_of_hell January 25 2005, 00:44:21 UTC
someone's been listening to Cream again...

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superflow January 25 2005, 15:53:40 UTC
You have just branded yourself as a cultural afterbirth.

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emperor_of_hell January 25 2005, 17:01:49 UTC
Daddy?

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