drabble...

[supergreak]

Investigating- a moment of curiosity, fourth year
Drabble
G, James, Lily, Severus

James perked his ears as he followed the faint strains of beautiful piano playing.  He tugged his cloak tighter, careful, don’t want detention.  The music got louder.  It was fast, bouncy, complex.  Louder still.  The door ahead was propped open, warm light emerging.

Comments

[vegablack62]

This was clever and fun to read. It's just a perfect little drabble. I loved the bond between Lily and Snape and James's jealousy. You told a nice little story.

[supergreak]

thanks!

[maevemist]

Nice :)

There are not enough traditional musician's in HP fanfiction in my opinion.

Thanks for sharing.

Now I have a picture of someone playing the harp...Fleur or Victoire maybe. (never mind me I'm just thinking outloud)

[matt_writer]

Haha, very good. :) I'm usually not a fan of drabbles -- I find them annoying, don't ask me why -- but this was really fun and original and special! I especially liked how well its tension (or whatever you want to call it) built up.

[supergreak]

Thanks!
My mind just wandered in that direction.

[nuclearsugars]

YAY DRABBLES! I've been reading too much NextGen recently because I was like, "Wait, why is James calling his brother Sev?" Then I realized it was Marauder's Era. *facepalm* It's still good though! I like how you captured the bond with Lily and Severus.

[supergreak]

Oh, my. That would be confusing:)
I'm glad you liked it.